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Please read it! There aren’t many choices including gems but when there are they are usually 5 or 8 or cheaper than it would usually be. It is a drama/romance/mystery called, “I trusted you” and it is by me, goldenhour

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Want to do r4r with me?

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sure whats ur story

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If you want to here is my story details the name of it is The Maione King

Story description: Since you were young you were training to lead your family with a powerful name. When they died they left you one mission. To find The Maione King. Can you handle the business or end up like your parents?

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reading it rn

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Same I’m reading yours now too

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I just read episode 1

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im on episode 2 rn

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episode 3 now…

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Almost done with two

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Now on 3

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done!

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How was it?

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really good!

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I just finished yours

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how was it? any feedback?

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Yeah it was good just sometimes when the characters talk they wasn’t moving their lip but beside that it was good

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Any feedback for me?

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not much actually just sometimes actions were unclear. Like how they felt because when its idle they look happy. Simple fix! :grin:

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