Hi! I just finished reading your story! 
Here’s some things to help with coding! If you want a character to be already in a scene once you start type &CHARACTER for example
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT - DAY
&Cut to zone 2
&CHARACTER stands screen (left, right, center)
@transition fade in black
Using & for things allows it to already be in a scenes zone you’d like too along with already placing a character already too so they don’t pop in after! I also noticed some of your characters overlapping at times they shouldn’t you can always put @CHARACTER moves to layer #
That will help so they can hug or kiss or interact in anyway without overlapping. As well as if s character is doing something where they face rear I found out it helps to do it like this as example to face the correct way you want, example:
Say you want a character to face left while doing a rear action,
@CHARACTER is tinker_kneel_neutral_loop_rear AND CHARACTER faces right
And it’s Vic’s versa for that facing right too I hope that helps!
