change labels and use my script
thanks ksena This is what its giving me now. Is the issue the brackets or just how its coded? 
And yeah, you don’t need labels for dressing game, unless you character, for example, goes outside and needs to wear a coat and then change dresses
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I removed the gain.
INT. PHILADELPHIA BEDROOM - DAY
@LACEY stands screen center
@LACEY faces right
label dressinggame_1
@speechbubble reset
LACEY (think)
(Help me choose an outfit for school)
choice
“Uniform 1.” (first_outfit){
@LACEY changes into LACEY SCHOOL 1_default
@LACEY is admire
@pause for a beat
@LACEY starts idle
LACEY (idle_arms_crossed)
(I love these colors!)
}
“Uniform 2.”{
@LACEY changes into LACEY SCHOOL 2_default
@LACEY is admire
@pause for a beat
LACEY (idle_arms_crossed)
(Black is slimming)
}
“Uniform 3.”{
@LACEY changes into LACEY SCHOOL 3_default
@LACEY is admire
@pause for a beat
@LACEY starts idle
LACEY (idle_arms_crossed)
(This will do)
}
LACEY
Shall I waer this?
choice
“Wear this!” {
} “I’ll try something else.” {
goto dressinggame_1
}
@LACEY starts idle_happy
Why do you have bracket on line 148
What i did was in the episode script there is a button that says choices. I clicked that and this was the script that it gave me. This is the original script and i just inputed my outfits- i have 3 choices
Choice - Outfit {
@LACEY stands screen center
@LACEY faces right
label dressinggame_1
@speechbubble reset
LACEY (think)
(I'd like to wear...)
choice (Eps1Outfit)
“Something flirty.”{
@LACEY previews outfit SampleGirlOutfit
####REPLACE THIS WITH ONE OF YOUR OUTFITS####
@LACEY is admire
@pause for a beat
@LACEY starts idle
LACEY (idle_arms_crossed)
(I love this look! I'll catch the eye of someone cute!)
choice
“Wear this!” {
@LACEY changes into SampleGirlOutfit
####REPLACE THIS WITH ONE OF YOUR OUTFITS####
gain SampleGirlOutfit
#This will let you check if they made this choice later.
goto afterdg1
} “I’ll try something else.” {
@LACEY unpreviews outfit SampleGirlOutfit
####REPLACE THIS WITH ONE OF YOUR OUTFITS####
goto dressinggame_1
}}“Something comfortable.”{
@LACEY previews outfit SampleGirlOutfit2
####REPLACE THIS WITH ONE OF YOUR OUTFITS####
@LACEY is admire
@pause for a beat
LACEY (idle_arms_crossed)
(This look let's me really feel like me!)
choice
“Wear this!” {
@LACEY changes into SampleGirlOutfit2
####REPLACE THIS WITH ONE OF YOUR OUTFITS####
gain SampleGirlOutfit2
#This will let you check if they made this choice later.
goto afterdg1
}“I’ll try something else”{
@LACEY unpreviews outfit SampleGirlOutfit2
####REPLACE THIS WITH ONE OF YOUR OUTFITS####
@LACEY starts idle_arms_crossed
goto dressinggame_1
}
}“What I have on.” {
LACEY (primp_condescend)
(I already look great!)
goto afterdg1
}
label afterdg1
@LACEY starts idle_happy
#}
oh yeah they suck. the script has a lot of uneseary stuff
I just spotted another mistake I have fixed try this script now
so if episode scripts are messed up then how should i input choices into my story? Is there an easier way?
like this
NAME
Text
choice
“text” {
}
“text” {
}
let me try hang on
did you try the new script I pass in. this one. I am pretty sure there is no mistakes
I removed the gain.
INT. PHILADELPHIA BEDROOM - DAY
@LACEY stands screen center
@LACEY faces right
label dressinggame_1
@speechbubble reset
LACEY (think)
(Help me choose an outfit for school)
choice
“Uniform 1.” (first_outfit){
@LACEY changes into LACEY SCHOOL 1_default
@LACEY is admire
@pause for a beat
@LACEY starts idle
LACEY (idle_arms_crossed)
(I love these colors!)
}
“Uniform 2.”{
@LACEY changes into LACEY SCHOOL 2_default
@LACEY is admire
@pause for a beat
LACEY (idle_arms_crossed)
(Black is slimming)
}
“Uniform 3.”{
@LACEY changes into LACEY SCHOOL 3_default
@LACEY is admire
@pause for a beat
@LACEY starts idle
LACEY (idle_arms_crossed)
(This will do)
}
LACEY
Shall I waer this?
choice
“Wear this!” {
} “I’ll try something else.” {
goto dressinggame_1
}
@LACEY starts idle_happy
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I don’t get it. i tried your new script
I am not sure the problem is fixed
INT. PHILADELPHIA BEDROOM - DAY
@LACEY stands screen center
@LACEY faces right
label dressinggame_1
@speechbubble reset
LACEY (think)
(Help me choose an outfit for school)
choice
“Uniform 1.” {
@LACEY changes into LACEY SCHOOL 1_default
@LACEY is admire
@pause for a beat
@LACEY starts idle
LACEY (idle_arms_crossed)
(I love these colors!)
}
“Uniform 2.”{
@LACEY changes into LACEY SCHOOL 2_default
@LACEY is admire
@pause for a beat
LACEY (idle_arms_crossed)
(Black is slimming)
}
“Uniform 3.”{
@LACEY changes into LACEY SCHOOL 3_default
@LACEY is admire
@pause for a beat
@LACEY starts idle
LACEY (idle_arms_crossed)
(This will do)
}
LACEY
Shall I wear this?
choice
“Wear this!” {
}
“I’ll try something else.” {
goto dressinggame_1
}
@LACEY starts idle_happy
YES ITS FIXED! Whatever you did worked. you rock
Awsome.
btw have you watched Joseph Evans videos on youtube. he makes great tutorials on youtube
No i’m new and have been using the episode guide and reading a lot but i will check it out. Thanks again for everyone’s help. 
Then you should getting started here is a link to his chanel. they are a great help
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1WgT7f_s3c4&list=PLeKgFV1aDXtSO6AocEPjEndR828Ps7SXs
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I need help… could you help me??
Depend on what you need help for