New writer would really appreciate any feedback!


#1

Hi, everyone!

I really loved the latest contest theme, i.e. Heroes & Villains, so I decided to enter.

This my first story ever and I would highly appreciate it if you could have a look at my story and maybe give me some feedback! I am happy to read back your stories as well!

The story is called H & V: Fate

Thank you very much in advance!


#2

Hey Alex! Would love to do a Read 4 Read with you! I will write you a fanmail and send screenshots once I am done.

Here’s my story:
Epi Username: @DCDarling
Author Name: Therese
Story Title: H&V: To the Edge of the Galaxy
Description: A Cyberpunk space odyssey about an Imperial Princess turned hero-for-hire. Go on galactic missions, fall in love & find your inner hero. Sci-Fi Japanese, Roman & Egyptian lore. CC.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/56471953149788161
Episodes: 3 (on-going)

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#3

Hey! My name is Dani! :black_heart:

If you want, I can review your story and post the review on my Instagram (daniepisodewriter).

The review will be focus on:

Plot/Originality
Directing
Language/Grammar (I can’t say much about grammar and language because English is not my first language, but if I spot any mistakes I’ll tell you.)
Overall opinion

:warning: The review will be as many episodes as you have read of my story. :warning:
Per example: If you read 3 episodes of my story, I’ll review the first 3 episodes of your story.
Maximum: 4 episodes

Here’s my story:
Title: Darkness
Author: Dani
Genre: Romance/Mystery
Style: Ink
Description: If you can’t get away from darkness, you learn to live with it… A vampire story with action, adventure, mystery and, of course, romance!
This is not a cliche vampire story!
Episodes: 6 (more to come)
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5439290271858688
Instagram: daniepisodewriter
I hope you like it :black_heart:

Any other person who wants a review can send me their story too! :blush::black_heart:

Tell me if you want me to do the review! :calling:


#5

Hi!! I just finished and published my story for the Heroes VS Villains contest!

Story Title: H & V: Deadly Seven
Description: It’s just you and your little sister, Anne. But when you just found out something is wrong with her, everything becomes complicated. Can you solve the puzzle and save your sister?

Chapters: 3 (complete!)
Genre: Drama/Romance/Comedy
Author: Bellarina CH
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5284993178140672
Style: Limelight
Features: MALE Main Character, Character customization, Multiple endings!

Please don’t hesitate to share your opinion about the story. You can mail me through episode or
you can follow my instagram for sneak peeks and updates too!
@bellarina.episode
Thank you!


#6

Hi, Dani!

Thanks a lot for your reply! You are offering a perfectly fair deal! And I would highly appreciate your feedback on all of these things!

Shall we do 4 episodes for 4 episodes then? Do you want me to send you screenshots from episode 4 as proof once I am done?


#7

Hi! It’s up to you! But 4 episodes look perfect for me! :blush:
I appreciate if you send me the screenshot for my instagram when you’ve read.


#8

Will do!


#9

Dani, I can’t seem to find your story, can you help me, please?

When I paste the link in the search bar nothing happens. I tried to search by name and author but there are too many which look similar.

I am new to sharing links, how do I actually use them to find a story?


#10

Hey everyone!
I’d like to promote my story called Complicated: with Bad Boy and Ugly Duckling here.
Below you can find the information you need to try it out.

Author: Mona K
Story Title: Complicated: with Bad Boy and Ugly Duckling
Genre: Romance, Drama, Action, Comedy
Description: Cathyln is constantly picked on by her peers. Boys make fun of her and her “friends” make her do errands for them. Revenge her peers, betrayers and what if guy changes or not?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4830482803589120
Instagram: @monak.episode

Please make sure to follow me on Instagram to contact me or for sneak peeks of the story!
I’m up for read for reads as well, contact me on Instagram for that, please! :slight_smile: :two_hearts:


#11

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


#12