NewAuthor here!

Hey Everyone I’m New here and I’m here for any feed back and ready to read your stories too!!

I just came out with this story and can you please review it for me and thanks in advance!!
And I use to write on Youtube:Saolina14

My story-Every Moment
Author:Melodylina
Genre:romance, love
Description:Every moment happens for a reason and even when you less except it.
Episode:1-3
Link:

Instagram:Melodylinastories

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What we need to work on.

  1. Spot Directing
  2. Cover
  3. Entertainment
  4. Punctuation

Welcome to the Forums!!:kissing_heart::kissing_heart:

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Okay and thank you and I’m still learning a lot!!

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Let’s do r4r

My story The Star Necklace

Description: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity

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sounds good I’ll do that after I’m done doing do editing to my animations in my story!

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I’m done editing and about to read your story!

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Title: Reincarnation

Description: Everything was normal until one day, your existence is suddenly erased, and you become someone you saw in your vision. Are you ready for what’s to come?

Genre: Romance/Mystery

Follow me on my Instagram: @steffie.hannie for more updates and sneak peeks

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5825536795934720

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I’ve updated my story and cover for Every Moment!

My story-Every Moment
Author: Melody lina
Genre:romance, love
Description:Every moment happens for a reason and even when you less except it.
Episode:1-3
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4837109345353728!

Duplicate closed. Refer to newest: I am doing a read for read and promote your story! :slight_smile: