Nicole's REview Thread ... yaaaaaayyyyy


#1

Hey do you want your art and/or story reviewed? Well I can do that!

If you want a story reviewed just send me the cover, title, and author.

If art, just send it and I will review it.


#2

I would love to!

Genre: Adventure/Fantasy/Comedy (If that makes sense)
Title: Save Me, Hero!
Author: Turtle Cat!
Plot/Summary: After powerless Hero moves from a town where everyone has superpowers, she gets kidnapped by a group of fugitives who are forcing her to join them. What will she do?
Style: Ink
I published this a few days ago, so it only has 3 episodes.
Cover:

HERE’S THE LINK!
Please be honest! If you can, could you please review all 3 chapters? Thanks for doing this!:grin:


#3

Is the story cover mandatory? Because I don’t have my story cover on here. It’s on my other device.


#4

It is not mandatory ^^


#5

Name: The Ember Moon Pack

Description:

Vampires, werewolves, and hybrids – who will you side with? Hey, Hybrid Queen, hurry up. War is on its way.

Customizable Characters, LGBTQ+, 5 Endings, Choices Matter, Music

Chapters: technically 9 bc ch 1 is customization

Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror

Style: Limelight

Link:

Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:

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Link Tree:


#6

Okay!
Story Title: The Royal Race
Author: Cassandra Dean


#7

The Royal Race by Cassandra Dean


#8

@Turtle_Cat

Some good things I noticed:

  • There were no grammar errors
  • An original plot
  • Overall unique

Having Hero as a name is a concept I haven’t seen before, so I liked that.

I I had any tips, I would say to move everything along a little bit faster, or add something.
During the first two chapters I was kinda bored. A reader may have clicked off

I don’t tend to be rude in any way, and I’m no pro at this.
I would give a solid 7/10 for being original


#9

Thanks! I’ll try to keep it active. That helped a lot!


#10

Np!


#11

I do have one question that I ask all my reviewers: Who’s your fav character? You don’t have to answer if you don’t feel like it.


#12

Hero seems pretty cool tbh


#13

Yeah. I think so, too.


#14

Thanks for doing this!
Here’s mine:
Title: Dreams and Nightmares
Author: Dreamer
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: Scarlet had a rough past and it looks like it’s not getting better after she was bought by some mysterious guy. Will she ever turn her life from a nightmare to a dream?
Episodes: 10 (more coming soon, I’m trying to update once a week)
Updates to this story: Dreams and Nightmares - my first story
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5452320906543104


#15

Story Review-

Title: The Seducer

Author: Sapphire

Cover:

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4874799514386432

First few chapters aren’t the best as the story started 2 years ago and they are being edited, but things pick up.

Thank you!


#16

@Sapphire15
May I ask who did your cover art


#17

Would love a review-
Story- Betting on a double
Author - Kalani Santino


#18

I’d love for some of my backgrounds to be reviewed! They’re right Here!


#19

Hey @QueenMilii
I looked at all of them, and they are all very nice.
You have a very large range of variety, garages, to casinos.

All the backgrounds are very nicely designed too, they have a theme and you can tell.
The edited backgrounds were very nice too, I don’t see any flaw with them.
9.5/10 for them

@everyone Don’t worry, I’m working on reading all the stories!


#20

Thank youuu!!! :heart: