Nicole's REview Thread ... yaaaaaayyyyy

Thanks! I’ll try to keep it active. That helped a lot!

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Np!

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I do have one question that I ask all my reviewers: Who’s your fav character? You don’t have to answer if you don’t feel like it.

Hero seems pretty cool tbh

Yeah. I think so, too.

Thanks for doing this!
Here’s mine:
Title: Dreams and Nightmares
Author: Dreamer
Genre: Romance
Style: Ink
Description: Scarlet had a rough past and it looks like it’s not getting better after she was bought by some mysterious guy. Will she ever turn her life from a nightmare to a dream?
Episodes: 10 (more coming soon, I’m trying to update once a week)
Updates to this story: Dreams and Nightmares - my first story
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5452320906543104

Story Review-

Title: The Seducer

Author: Sapphire

Cover:

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4874799514386432

First few chapters aren’t the best as the story started 2 years ago and they are being edited, but things pick up.

Thank you!

@Sapphire15
May I ask who did your cover art

Would love a review-
Story- Betting on a double
Author - Kalani Santino

I’d love for some of my backgrounds to be reviewed! They’re right Here!

Hey @QueenMilii
I looked at all of them, and they are all very nice.
You have a very large range of variety, garages, to casinos.

All the backgrounds are very nicely designed too, they have a theme and you can tell.
The edited backgrounds were very nice too, I don’t see any flaw with them.
9.5/10 for them

@everyone Don’t worry, I’m working on reading all the stories!

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Thank youuu!!! :heart:

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Hi I would really appreciate it if you could review my story please
Title : ferewick

:boarding school
Author name : Rebecca bloodworth
Genre:mystery

Hi, Nicole.

Here is my story.

Title: Crossed Paths

Author name: Dreamer

Description: Mindy’s life’s filled with joy and laughter but is haunted by heartbreak. All that changes when she meets Derek. Will he be able to mend her broken heart? CHOICES MATTER!

Follow Mindy through a journey of ups and downs, surrounded by bonkers friends and family and self-discovery!

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5294643993772032 4

@gisellec

  • No grammar or directing errors
  • Seemed pretty original
  • decent sized episodes

I would say your story is the only on that I have seen like it.

Though I didn’t like that the first episode was only customizing.
That might have made a few readers click off.

Again this is just a few tips and what I think was good.
I give an 8/10 for the story

@Raniksa
@raniksa.ep (instagram) :blush:

@RainbowCat

  • Long chapters
  • Clear character development
  • Good title and description

I enjoyed reading the first few episodes, I thought they would be good for hooking a reader.

Some of the directing was a little rough at times, but that’s understandable.
Make sure to keep the story clear, and not confusing.

Overall I liked reading it and thought it was a good story.
9/10 for your story

Thank you for your feedback! :slight_smile:

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If you don’t mind, may you review my story?

Author: Mystery

Title: Skai’s Stories
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