Nierido`s story review 🐼

#1

Reviews
Hey, guys! I got some free time and I am willing to read your stories! I`ll review them in insta.
So, to get a feedback you need to follow me on insta @epi.nierido and fill out the form:
Form

1.Story title
2.Short description
3.Genre
4.Style
5.Chapters
6.Link
7.Cover
8.Insta

Rates

1.Plot. (/10)
2.Coding (zooms,pans, characters positioning etc) (/10)
4.Dialogues (/10)
5.Title (/10)
6. Characters (/10)
7. Length (/10)
8.Arts and covers (/10)
9.Overall (/10)

Also I`d really appreciate if you give a try to my story: Let the demon inside (http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4876381520789504)
Waiting list:

  1. @Days
  2. @harly_episode
  3. @Mia_writes
  4. @S_Unique
  5. @Anna_Almast
  6. @Kelzblogs
  7. @AlessgGX
#2

Hey, you reviewed my story Crossed Paths before and I have revamped it so I would love to see what you think of it now. I also reviewed your story previously. :heart:

Btw I do not have insta so is it okay if I follow you on the app?

#3

It is fine:) I`ll post review there and in insta too:)
Could you please fill out the form or send me a link?

#4

I’d love if you could give our story a review :blush:

Title - Beautiful Broken Lies
Short description - Elena’s life seems perfect. Partying, boys, friends, you name it. That is until a dark tragedy changes her life forever. What is the truth? Will it break her?
Genre - mystery
Style - ink
Chapters - 5 so far
Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6662026650320896
cover -
This our cover just now
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And we are just waiting on this one to be approved!

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Instagram - harly_episode

Thanks so much :blush:

#5

Here you go :heart:

#6
  1. Life Without Jennifer
  2. An accident has Jennifer torn from the world. Her loved ones are now left to learn how to live without her.
  3. Drama
  4. Ink
  5. 3 out
  6. http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5397065844785152

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8. @miawritesepisode

#7

Hey, thank you so much for creating this thread.:slight_smile:
Author: S_Unique

Title: The Four Horsemen

Genre: Fantasy

Style: Ink

Nº of episodes: 6 (ongoing)

Description: 4 Sins. 4 Angels fell. 4 Horsemen rose. A curse was casted. And the battle of good vs evil is about to begin. CC/ Choices matter

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5482099054608384

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Insta: @s_unique_episode

#8

1.Story title- KILL YOUR DREAMS
2.Short description - Anne lives the same day again and in the end she gets killed. Now she tries to find the killer. Story is filled with drama and romance.
3.Genre - Thriller
4.Style - Limelight
5.Chapters - 3
6.Link- http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4905142231891968
7.Cover-

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8.Insta - anna_._episode

#9

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Title: THE NEW GUY Author: KELZBLOGS Genre: Gay/Romance Style: INK Summary: Justin is secretly gay but when the hot new guy from Cali comes along can he keep his secret and hide his feelings for the new guy who’s straight.

#10

Name story: Amazing Inside
Genre: Fantasty
Style; Limelight
Chapters: 3 - will be continue.
Description: Can Emma control her emotion when she realize they come out and talk to her!! Can she balance love, family and friendship before a mystery power come and destroy everything.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5843577419464704 1 2

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#11

Hey:) sorry for waiting.

  1. Plot: 8/10. I love the introduction you made, “ sisters talk” , “ angel/demon mindy” and especially comedy moments. However, the end of the 1st chapter didn’t hook me up. Try to add a cliffhanger in order to hook your readers and make them want to read more and more.
  2. Coding: 7/10. It’s great that you use zooms and pans, but sometimes when you zoom characters are clipped. Also sometimes characters pop up. And I’d advise you to spot characters during “dance club scene” at the same level.
  3. Dialogues: 10/10. I didn’t find any grammar mistakes, and I love that you show MC thought.
  4. Title: 10/10. The title perfectly fits the story.
  5. Characters: 9/10. All characters are diverse and unique, but I find the MC behavior kind of weird.
  6. Length: 8/10. Chapters are a little bit short.
  7. Arts: 10/10. I love all you arts, covers and splashes!
  8. Overall: I member the first version of the story, and you did a really really great job! Good luck❤️
#12

Thank you!!!

#13

Story Title: In a Starry Night
Author Name: Fatima Al star
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance/drama
Episodes: 3 (more coming soon!)
Story Description: Rose goes thorough a lot of difficulties that will lead her to find secrets that were hidden for years! Will she ever find happiness and love? (Choices matter)
Instagram Name: @fatima_stories
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5756418218131456

Story cover

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#14

Hello~
Please please check out my story!
It would mean the world to me cry emoji
I hope you still have some free time LOL
Title: Opposite in Harmony
Author: Pheebsnomenal
Genre: Fantasy/Romance/Adventure
Episodes: 4 right now, still going!
Description: Aimie is the princess of all angels and will she sacrifice everything, including her family to stand up for what is right? Or will she stand by her family’s side and never find true love? Her fate will be decided by YOU! <3
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Here’s the link
http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5322669636845568

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1.Story title - Sophisticated & Deceived
2.Short description - Ashden, a 26 year old young woman learns that life isn’t about being emotionless and too sophisticated. Will a guy help her explore her emotions in life?
3.Genre - Romance
4.Style - Ink
5.Chapters - Ashden and Grayson (those are the main characters)
6.Link - http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5716365262585856
7.Cover -

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8.Insta - @brianam.stories

#17

Done :slight_smile:

#18

@AlessgGX @Kelzblogs @Mia_writes @S_Unique @Anna_Almast @Briana_M @AnonymousAuthor1 @Fatima_Alstar23 @pheebsnomenal Hey guys! Sorry for waiting! I have a long flight today (approximately 22 hours), so I can review your stories only tomorrow. I hope you will understand! Thanks❤️

#19

No problem

#20

Take your time :blush: