Not quite right [Closed]

Hello! I am writing a story but beginning doesn’t look quite pretty :slightly_frowning_face:
Can please someone tell me how it can be better !

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lts good! Dont change it, yr character is looking at a ballet flyer, and so what do u think yr character is wondering? is she going to enter or just?

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Thank you so much :blush:
She is going to enter it like she always dreamed of

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perfect!

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To be honest that looks awesome.
If you ever need help with your story I do pre-pro ballet in the ever-so-strict Russian style.

:hear_no_evil:

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Thank you! I am remembering that offer and def going to dm you

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@Sydney_H Can someone close this thread?

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Closed by OP request. :smiley: