Oh crap help me out please!

I wanted to throw choices into my story but OH MAN this is a total disaster!
How hard is it to do that shit? like wow
The error says “Choices must follow dialogue immediately not a branch”
I don’t get it? Do I need to move the Choice? or the { } ? please help me out because oh man

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You’re character needs to think or talk before a choice.

Oh but I want to give the reader a choice of replaying the last episode? so there is no character in screen then?

then use NARRATOR

And like what? because I already have a narrator speak before the choice but I still got that error

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did something happen between the text and he choice

like a pause. or a music off. a zoom or something.

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can you show the script

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You have to have like this:
KIMMY
Do I wanna eat this?
choice “Yes!”{

} “No!!”{

}

Okay so I changed it a little bit because there was a transition in front… but now it is like there is an other error

It’s says that my first { doesn’t have an ending but there actually is

show the script. it much more easy to help if people can see the script

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choice 
    "Honey I can't remember the ending of episode 1 anymore!" {

INT. ARCHIVE ROOM - DAY
@LEWIS spot 1.300 250 0
@ALEX enters from left to spot 1.300 100 0
LEWIS (talk_think_neutral)
Alex the background check is done.
ALEX (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Let’s find out who she really is. }

"Bitch please, I can remember! { }

try this

choice
“Honey I can’t remember the ending of episode 1 anymore!” {

INT. ARCHIVE ROOM - DAY
@LEWIS spot 1.300 250 0
@ALEX enters from left to spot 1.300 100 0
LEWIS (talk_think_neutral)
Alex the background check is done.
ALEX (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Let’s find out who she really is.

}
“Bitch please, I can remember!” {

}

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yES thank you it worked!

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Happy to help

} this need to be one its own line. right over the next choice

and you where missing an " on the end of the second choice

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Thank youu saving angle

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