I wanted to throw choices into my story but OH MAN this is a total disaster!
How hard is it to do that shit? like wow
The error says “Choices must follow dialogue immediately not a branch”
I don’t get it? Do I need to move the Choice? or the { } ? please help me out because oh man
You’re character needs to think or talk before a choice.
Oh but I want to give the reader a choice of replaying the last episode? so there is no character in screen then?
then use NARRATOR
And like what? because I already have a narrator speak before the choice but I still got that error
did something happen between the text and he choice
like a pause. or a music off. a zoom or something.
can you show the script
You have to have like this:
KIMMY
Do I wanna eat this?
choice “Yes!”{
} “No!!”{
}
Okay so I changed it a little bit because there was a transition in front… but now it is like there is an other error
It’s says that my first { doesn’t have an ending but there actually is
show the script. it much more easy to help if people can see the script
choice
"Honey I can't remember the ending of episode 1 anymore!" {
INT. ARCHIVE ROOM - DAY
@LEWIS spot 1.300 250 0
@ALEX enters from left to spot 1.300 100 0
LEWIS (talk_think_neutral)
Alex the background check is done.
ALEX (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Let’s find out who she really is. }
"Bitch please, I can remember! { }
try this
choice
“Honey I can’t remember the ending of episode 1 anymore!” {
INT. ARCHIVE ROOM - DAY
@LEWIS spot 1.300 250 0
@ALEX enters from left to spot 1.300 100 0
LEWIS (talk_think_neutral)
Alex the background check is done.
ALEX (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Let’s find out who she really is.
}
“Bitch please, I can remember!” {
}
yES thank you it worked!
Happy to help
} this need to be one its own line. right over the next choice
and you where missing an " on the end of the second choice
Thank youu saving angle