Okay, so I'm ready for the criticism... (promote your stories!)

Hi there :blush:
So basically, I have made the first episode of my new story and I would really like some advice,plot lines, directing ideas, tips, anything you can throw at me.I would also love some constructive criticism :heart:. I also don’t have a cover :sweat_smile:

Title: Everlasting

Author: E l l a n a

Style: LL

Chapters: 1, 2-3 in the works :heart:

Genre: Fantasy/Adventure

Description: Nothing lasts forever is something Juliet is familiar with.And love especially. Can Gabriel, a gentle outlaw from another kingdom, change her mind? (it’s not great but I promise the story is!)
LINK: https://www.episodeinteractive.com/write/story/return_to_sender/1

Bye guys xxx :heart:

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would you like to do a r4r? :grin:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy (Thriller)
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6250660385652736
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.

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Chapters: 4 (More to come)

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:

Thanks for the thread

Here’s my story The Star Necklace

Description: you are the most rich girl in your country in addition you’re famous but what happens when the Star Necklace uncovers your true identity

Title: Bad Behavior
Author: Aaliyah Ali
Genre: Drama
Episodes: 5 (more to come)
Summary: How will Alana, Lucas, Ryan, and Rachel survive their past and conquer their future…
If bad behavior follows them everywhere they go?
cc, and choices available!
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5778189056540672

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Story: Autumn Falls.
Author: Luna.
Genre: Romance.
Style: Ink.
Chapters:17 (ongoing)

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Here’s my story- ( I am up for R4R) PM me for more.
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It’s called-
Story- ADVENTURE: Adventure House
Genre- Adventure/Horror
Chapter (So-far)- 3
Style- Lime Light
Description- The world is not what is seems from the outside and you have realized it the hard way. The Adventure in the Adventure House is gonna be a hell of a ride for you and your friends.

http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4878254382579712

Thank you for this thread!

Story: Adventurous: Time Immune
Genre: Adventure
Summary: When loud-mouth Mikea sets off on a road-trip with YOU, it becomes harder to hide the truth of your origin… oh, and that you are an immortal cyborg.
CC, POC, LGBT, multiple endings
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6566049968685056

Story: Sorry, Wrong Number
Genre: Thriller
Summary: “And that’s how we’ll get rid of the body. Sorry, wrong number.”
When a text is sent to the wrong person, it leads to a race against time to prevent a murder. TEXT BASED
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5933958626344960

Thanks for this thread!
My Adventurous story is called “Adventurous: Beyond The Line” and it’s actually based on the first story I have ever written and the one that got me into writing, back in February 2010 when I was only 12 years old! I decided to revive the characters and recreate the plot, so this story is very dear to my heart :relaxed:

Story title: Adventurous: Beyond The Line
Genre: Adventure
Customization: Full customization
Style: Ink AND Limelight! It’s a “choose animation style” story!
Chapters: 3
Author: Tal Gordin (@talgordin.writes on Instagram)
Summary: Taria travels to Earth to protect herself from the dangers of her world. Can she find the adventure she was looking for by breaking Gabriel’s rules?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4815325031366656
Hope you decide to give it a try!