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Okay can someone please help? In my story I want my character to eat a bagel and by the next scene for her to no longer have it, however this isn’t happening. The bagel isn’t showing up in the beginning! It’s no where to be scene! Here is the script can someone please help, this is urgent:
EXT. CITY HIGHWAY LOOP - DAY with CAR ANGLE SILVER
sound car_motor
@FEM1 moves to layer 1 AND FEM2 moves to layer 0
@overlay CAR ANGLE SILVER shifts to -228 -6 AND overlay CAR ANGLE SILVER scales to 0.735 0.735 AND FEM1 spot 1.147 90 -144 AND FEM2 spot 1.118 144 -132 AND FEM1 faces right AND FEM2 faces right
@speechbubble is 219 242 to 78% with tail_bottom_left
FEM2 (talk_agree_happy)
I bought you a bagel
@speechbubble is 134 252 to 78% with tail_bottom_left
FEM1 (talk_agree_happy)
Thank you so much, I’m starving!
@add Bagel Cream Cheese to FEM1
&FEM1 starts eat_food_hand_neutral
@speechbubble is 217 256 to 86% with tail_bottom_left
@remove Bagel Cream Cheese from FEM1
FEM2 (talk_awkward_loop)
Did you hear about the peace treaty breaking?
I can’t believe they did that!
Russia and America have been at peace for at least 15 years,
Why destroy that?
@FEM2 is idle_awkward_uneasy_loop AND FEM1 is idle_awkward_scratch_loop
sound car_running_lp
FEM1 (talk_think_neutral)
I don’t know but I intend to prepare for the worse!
@speechbubble is 217 237 to 78% with tail_bottom_left
FEM2 (talk_think_neutral)
How?
FEM1 (talk_armscrossed_shrug_neutral)
I don’t know yet but somehow
@zoom on 100 89 to 259% in 0
@speechbubble is 158 158 to 92% with tail_top_right
FEM2 (talk_excited_happy)
Hey do you wanna go grab some coffee? My shout!
@speechbubble is 163 137 to 107% with tail_top_left
FEM1 (talk_explain_neutral)
I don’t know, we’ll be late
@speechbubble is 148 133 to 104% with tail_top_right
FEM2 (talk_excited_happy)
Come on! You never know, we might not be able to get coffee soon, not if there’s a war
@FEM1 is eyeroll_subtle
@zoom on 77 137 to 471% in 0
FEM1 (think_rubchin)
(Should we be late and grab a coffee or go to school on time?)
choice
“Be late” {
@speechbubble is 170 108 to 99% with tail_top_left
FEM1 (talk_agree_happy)
Okay, let’s go grab some coffee
goto coffee_shop
} “Go to school on time” goto school
label school
EXT. CITY HIGHWAY LOOP - DAY with CAR ANGLE SILVER
@overlay CAR ANGLE SILVER shifts to -228 -6 AND overlay CAR ANGLE SILVER scales to 0.735 0.735 AND FEM1 spot 1.147 90 -144 AND FEM2 spot 1.118 144 -132 AND FEM1 faces right AND FEM2 faces right
FEM1 (talk_think_neutral)
I think it’s best if we just go to school
FEM2 (talk_shrug_neutral)
Alright your loss
INT. BLACK - DAY
@speechbubble is 164 254 to 87%
NARRATOR
At School
INT. BLUE SCHOOL HALLWAY - DAY
@zoom reset
@remove Bagel Cream Cheese from FEM1
@FEM1 moves to layer 2 AND FEM2 moves to layer 2
@EXTRA2 spot 0.670 67 235 in zone 1 AND EXTRA2 faces right AND EXTRA2 is talk_explain_neutral AND EXTRA9 spot 0.681 132 229 in zone 1 AND EXTRA9 is listen_nod_neutral_loop AND EXTRA9 faces left AND EXTRA6 spot 0.837 234 160 in zone 1 AND EXTRA6 is listen_phone_confused AND EXTRA5 spot 0.744 179 223 in zone 2 AND EXTRA5 is talk_smile_happy_loop AND EXTRA3 spot 0.730 107 229 in zone 2 AND EXTRA3 is listen_nod_neutral_loop AND EXTRA3 faces right AND EXTRA1 spot 0.783 93 187 in zone 3 AND EXTRA1 is laugh_giggle AND EXTRA1 faces right AND EXTRA10 spot 0.815 113 176 in zone 3 AND EXTRA10 faces right AND EXTRA10 is kiss_playful_loop_rear
@FEM1 enters from left to spot 1.280 103 -6 AND FEM2 enters from left to spot 1.280 230 -6 THEN FEM2 faces left
FEM2 (talk_think_neutral)
What’s the time?
@FEM1 is read_phone_neutral_loop
FEM1 (talk_neutral)
8:42 Home room is in 3 minutes
FEM2 (talk_shrug_neutral)
Let’s just go now
@pan to zone 3 in 7 AND FEM1 walks to spot 1.280 99 12 in zone 3 in 7 AND FEM2 walks to spot 1.280 220 12 in zone 3 in 7 THEN FEM2 walks to spot 0.694 269 226 in 3 AND FEM1 walks to spot 0.700 220 221 in 3
@FEM2 is tinker_stand_neutral_loop_rear AND FEM2 faces left
@pause for a beat
@remove FEM2 AND FEM1 walks to spot 0.694 269 226 in 2 THEN remove FEM1

What do I do?


#2

Maybe because you just removed it after adding it to her :sweat_smile:


#3

OMG I’m an actual idiot TYSM!