Omg Why can't I understand this

Where at?

line 6075

its a choice right?

yeah

Isnt it like { }

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yeah but than it says unexpected string.

Delete lines 6073 and 6074

If you’re just doing a simple choice, and not a choice within a choice, then delete the } on line 6072

it says unexpected string???

Can you show your whole entire choice?

why it’s kinda messy. So I was going for a outfit choice and than just a simple choice like stand up to her and or don’t stand up to her. Here it is.

NARRATOR
Introducing the point system. You will either gain or lose points in this game. Try to gain confidence points.

label dressing_game_1
NARRATOR
What should you wear?
choice
“Bangin” {
@NAME changes into SCPE
@NAME is primp_neutral
NAME
I’ll make a splash with this outfit.
@NAME +1
readerMessage Confidence +1

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
COME OUT. We don't got all day!

@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat

@NAME enters from left to screen left
@NAME spot 1.280 54 -14 in zone 1

@NAME faces right

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Oscar! What's the rush? We have 20 minutes



    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
You're watch is wrong it's 8:16.

    OSCAR
Omg! what are you wearing?

    NAME
You like it.

    OSCAR
Yeah. but why.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Listen I'm reventing myself this year meaning I need to look different.

@OSCAR is laugh_chuckle
@NAME is laugh_giggle

    NAME (blush_shy)
I'm reinventing myself this year I'm serious

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
You're perfect. You don't need to reinvent yourself.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
I want a life full of adventure and fun.

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Okay be careful don't leave me.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
I'd never leave you. You're my bestie.

@zoom on 0 399 to 199% in 0
@NAME is primp_neutral
@NAME is talk_agree_happy

    OSCAR (blush_shy)
(Could we ever be more?)

    NARRATOR (OSCAR)
Since we were little I was deeply in love with her. Since our first hello, since our first conversation. Her beautiful breathtaking eyes and her beautiful voluminous hair.

    NARRATOR
She looked so different today, she raidated confience and securtiry. It was refreshing. I've always loved her, but she took my breath away today.

@NAME is laugh_crackup
@pause for a beat
@zoom reset

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Come on let's get going.

@NAME exits right

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Wait for me!

@OSCAR exits right AND OSCAR is run_super_speed_loop

@transition fade out black

@NAME is laugh_crackup AND OSCAR is laugh_crackup
@transition fade out black
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT OL - DAY
&NAME spot 1.451 126 -57 in zone 1
&OSCAR spot 1.451 239 -57 in zone 3
@cut to zone 3
@OSCAR is idle_argument_angry_loop
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat

@cut to zone 1
@NAME is idle_argument_angry_loop
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
NARRATOR
In class it’s a battle field… not so friendly.
@NAME is raisehand_neutral
&OSCAR spot 1.451 239 -57 in zone 3
@cut to zone 3
@OSCAR is raisehand_neutral
@cut to zone 1

&NAME spot 1.451 126 -57 in zone 1
@NAME is raisehand_neutral
@cut to zone 3
@OSCAR is raisehand_neutral
sound schoolbell
music off

@transition curtain out_left
INT. BLUE SCHOOL HALLWAY LOCKERS - DAY
@NAME spot 1.280 157 -25 in zone 1 AND NAME faces left
@OSCAR spot 1.280 44 24 in zone 1 AND OSCAR faces right

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Mrs. Kelly said I had more points.

    OSCAR (talk_sarcastic)
Well I had more last time

    NAME (talk_think_neutral)
So it's a tie, what should the tie breaker be?

    OSCAR
Who ever gets a higher mark on the geometry test tommorow.

    NAME (talk_primp_neutral)
Geometry is my subject.

    NAME (talk_argue_angry)
You're going down!

@OSCAR is blush_shy

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
I have a higher average in geometry

    NAME (talk_sarcastic)
By one percent. I made Mrs. Kelly cookies, I'm pretty sure she'll raise it to 100

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
We'll see!

@HAZEL enters from right to spot 1.280 190 -13

@NAME walks to upscreen left AND NAME faces left
@ZACKK enters from left to spot 1.280 271 27

    HAZEL (talk_sarcastic)
Babe! look they're competing over points again. Even with a hot outfit she's still a loser.

    HAZEL (talk_angry)
So fucking pathetic!

    HAZEL
    AND (NAME) your social life is non- existent. That new look won't help it.

    HAZEL
Whatever you do you can't fix yourself. You chase away the boys.


    HAZEL
Ooh and maybe girls too.

@NAME is react_angry_shakefists

    HAZEL (talk_sarcastic)
Aww baby she's mad!

    NAME (talk_angry)
Stop it

    HAZEL (talk_airquotes)
Or what? What are you going to do?

    NAME (idle_argument_angry_loop)
(She's been bullying me since grade 7.. what should I do?)

choice
“Stand up to her”{

    NAME (talk_primp_neutral)
You know what you're just jealous.

    HAZEL (talk_argue_defensive)
Jealous!! Of what!!

    NAME (talk_primp_neutral)
You said it yourself love. I'm smart and now I'm actaually becoming confident.

    NAME (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
You're afriad because I don't care about looks, I won't to marry someone to be succesfull.

@HAZEL is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    HAZEL (talk_argue_angry)
You little-

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
I'm not done love.

    NAME (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
I'm already planning to go to harvard for medicine.

    NAME (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
I'm going becme a doctor and be known of the cure of cancer

    NAME (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
While you will be known for someone's wife.

@HAZEL is idle_argument_angry_loop
@OSCAR is laugh_crackup
@ZACKK is idle_argument_angry_loop

    ZACKK (talk_sarcastic)
Honey let's go don't waste your breath on losers.

@NAME walks to screen left AND NAME faces right
@OSCAR walks to upscreen left AND OSCAR faces right

    OSCAR (talk_argue_angry)
Excuse me? That's my best friend.

@HAZEL walks to screen right AND HAZEL faces left
@ZACKK walks to screen center AND ZACKK faces left

@ZACKK is laugh_crackup
@OSCAR is idle_argument_angry_loop

    ZACKK (talk_argue_angry)
Why'd you say to me, tewrp?

    OSCAR (talk_angry
I said f**k you. Don't talk about [NAME] like that ever agin.

    ZACKK (talk_agree_happy)
What are yu gonna do about it?

    OSCAR (talk_argue_angry)
I'd make you pay


    ZACKK (talk_agree_happy)
Take your best shot.

@HAZEL exits right AND HAZEL is walk_angry_loop

    NAME (talk_afraid)
Don't listen to him!

@OSCAR faces left

    OSCAR (talk_angry)
No I'm tired of this. They always do this. Leave okay after the pyscho b*tch left. We have no idea what she'll do.


    NAME (talk_unsure)
Are you sure?

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Go... I've been waiting for this my whole life.

@NAME exits left AND NAME is walk_runway_loop
@ZACKK walks to screen center
@OSCAR walks to screen left

@OSCAR is punch_fight_give_angry AND ZACKK is punch_fight_receive_angry
@OSCAR is punch_fight_give_angry AND ZACKK is punch_fight_receive_angry

@ZACKK is punch_fight_give_angry AND OSCAR is punch_fight_receive_angry
@OSCAR is punch_fight_give_angry AND ZACKK is punch_fight_receive_angry

    OSCAR (talk_argue_defensive)
Don't ever talk about ever again!

@transition iris out

INT. LIBRARY - DAY
@NAME enters from left to screen right

    NARRATOR
After 6 painful hours of being teased I was home. Yes I have my own library.

    NAME (talk_phone_happy_loop)
Oscar come over! I'm at the library.

    NAME (hangup_phone_angry)
Okay bye!

@pan to zone 2

@NAME enters from left to screen right

@NAME changes into NAME_default

@NAME faces left

    NAME (standup_neutral)
(OMG! Where's the end?)

@OSCAR changes into USUAL

@OSCAR faces right

@OSCAR walks to screen center

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
So! Today was really something. I'm tried of that school.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
You know how I said I'd be reinventing myself. I found a book. In the dust shelf. It was glowing.

@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to NAME

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
Let me see!

@remove Spell Book Open Grey Black from NAME

@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to OSCAR

    OSCAR (talk_think_neutral)
There's no end and middle!

    NAME (talk_apathetic)
That's not the weird part. Look at this.

    NAME (talk_whisper_worried)
It's back page has this page written in Latin.

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
I got this! I happen to know | italic |LATIN

    NAME (idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Where did you learn LATIN!!

    OSCAR (blush_shy)
Summer Camp

@NAME is laugh_crackup

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Do you want me to translate or not.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Okay! Translate.

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
| italic , bold | 'Orbrothas est terra incidentia fuit. Et sanguis in circuitu. Omnes cantilenarum mortuus es. Dilaceratus est. Orbrothas est incidentia fuit.'

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
Omg!

    NAME (scream_angry)
Tell me!

    OSCAR (talk_afraid)
Calm down! Sheesh

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
It says 'Orbrothas is falling. And bloodshed is all around. All the melodies are dead. Torn into pieces. Obrothas is falling.'


    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Wow! Let's read the begnin-

    OSCAR (react_scream_horror)
What's happening?

    NAME (react_shocked_gasp)
MY BOOKS!

&zoom on 126 568 to 155% 0

@transition fade in black 1

@NAME spot 1.280 155 438 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is crowdsurf_excited_loop

@pause for a beat

&zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.3

@NAME walks to spot 1.280 155 -93 in 0.3 AND NAME does it while crowdsurf_excited_loop THEN NAME starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

sound car_crash
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1

&zoom on 0 100 to 100% 0
&zoom on 126 568 to 155% 0

@transition fade in black 1

@NAME spot 1.280 155 438 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is crowdsurf_excited_loop

@pause for a beat

&zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.3
@zoom reset
@zoom on 349 15 to 97% in 0

    OSCAR (talk_afraid)
No! Omg are you oka-

@OSCAR walks to spot 1.280 155 -93 in 0.3 AND OSCAR does it while crowdsurf_excited_loop THEN OSCAR starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

sound car_crash
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1

&zoom on 0 100 to 100% 0
&zoom on 126 568 to 155% 0
@zoom reset
@zoom reset
@zoom reset

@transition fade out black

EXT. MOUNTAINS - DAY
@OSCAR is fall AND NAME is fall
@OSCAR is standup_neutral AND NAME is standup_neutral
@NAME walks to screen center

    OSCAR (talk_flashlight_scared)
Where are we? This is not Atlanta.

    NAME (talk_afraid)
What the hell!

    NARRATOR (OSCAR)
We're not in Atlanta! We're in Obrothas! We're stuck in the book.
A book with no ending!

@NAME is react_shocked_gasp

} “Don’t say anything.” {
@NAME is idle_awkward_scratch_loop
@OSCAR is idle_argument_angry_loop

    OSCAR
What the hell happened to us?

    OSCAR
We were so close! Our moms were besties and all gave birth in the same year.

    HAZEL
You know what happened? You guys left us.

    NAME
We left you, right when we entered high school you started bullying me.

    HAZEL
Well you're smart and had everything going for you. Populairity is all I had.

    NAME
So you took it out on me, instead asking me for help.

    HAZEL
I don't need your help.

@HAZEL exits right AND HAZEL walk_angry_loop
@ZACKK exits right AND ZACKK walk_angry_loop

@OSCAR walks to screen center AND OSCAR faces left

    OSCAR
You good?

    NAME (talk_angry)
I hate them.

    NAME (talk_sad)
She's right ain't she?

@NAME is cry_sniff_sad_loop

    OSCAR (talk_sad_serious_loop)
Of course not.

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
You're the most beautiful,smart and kind woman ever, I'm so glad you're my best friend. I love you.

    NAME
I love you too.

&OSCAR spot 1.280 109 -10 AND OSCAR faces right AND OSCAR is hug_rear AND OSCAR moves to layer 1
&NAME stands screen left AND NAME faces right AND NAME is hug AND NAME moves to layer -1

    OSCAR
Don't believe them.

@transtion fade out

INT. LIBRARY - DAY
@NAME enters from left to screen right

    NARRATOR
After 6 painful hours of being teased I was home. Yes I have my own library.

    NAME (talk_phone_happy_loop)
Oscar come over! I'm at the library.

    NAME (hangup_phone_angry)
Okay bye!

@pan to zone 2

@NAME enters from left to screen right

@NAME changes into NAME_default

@NAME faces left

    NAME (standup_neutral)
(OMG! Where's the end?)

@OSCAR changes into USUAL

@OSCAR faces right

@OSCAR walks to screen center

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
So! Today was really something. I'm tried of that school.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
You know how I said I'd be reinventing myself. I found a book. In the dust shelf. It was glowing.

@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to NAME

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
Let me see!

@remove Spell Book Open Grey Black from NAME

@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to OSCAR

    OSCAR (talk_think_neutral)
There's no end and middle!

    NAME (talk_apathetic)
That's not the weird part. Look at this.

    NAME (talk_whisper_worried)
It's back page has this page written in Latin.

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
I got this! I happen to know | italic |LATIN

    NAME (idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Where did you learn LATIN!!

    OSCAR (blush_shy)
Summer Camp

@NAME is laugh_crackup

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Do you want me to translate or not.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Okay! Translate.

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
| italic , bold | 'Orbrothas est terra incidentia fuit. Et sanguis in circuitu. Omnes cantilenarum mortuus es. Dilaceratus est. Orbrothas est incidentia fuit.'

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
Omg!

    NAME (scream_angry)
Tell me!

    OSCAR (talk_afraid)
Calm down! Sheesh

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
It says 'Orbrothas is falling. And bloodshed is all around. All the melodies are dead. Torn into pieces. Obrothas is falling.'


    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Wow! Let's read the begnin-

    OSCAR (react_scream_horror)
What's happening?

    NAME (react_shocked_gasp)
MY BOOKS!

&zoom on 126 568 to 155% 0

@transition fade in black 1

@NAME spot 1.280 155 438 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is crowdsurf_excited_loop

@pause for a beat

&zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.3

@NAME walks to spot 1.280 155 -93 in 0.3 AND NAME does it while crowdsurf_excited_loop THEN NAME starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

sound car_crash
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1

&zoom on 0 100 to 100% 0
&zoom on 126 568 to 155% 0

@transition fade in black 1

@NAME spot 1.280 155 438 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is crowdsurf_excited_loop

@pause for a beat

&zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.3
@zoom reset
@zoom on 349 15 to 97% in 0

    OSCAR (talk_afraid)
No! Omg are you oka-

@OSCAR walks to spot 1.280 155 -93 in 0.3 AND OSCAR does it while crowdsurf_excited_loop THEN OSCAR starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

sound car_crash
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1

&zoom on 0 100 to 100% 0
&zoom on 126 568 to 155% 0
@zoom reset
@zoom reset
@zoom reset

@transition fade out black

EXT. MOUNTAINS - DAY
@OSCAR is fall AND NAME is fall
@OSCAR is standup_neutral AND NAME is standup_neutral
@NAME walks to screen center

    OSCAR (talk_flashlight_scared)
Where are we? This is not Atlanta.

    NAME (talk_afraid)
What the hell!

    NARRATOR (OSCAR)
We're not in Atlanta! We're in Obrothas! We're stuck in the book.
A book with no ending!

}

} “CUTE CASUAL”{
@NAME changes into SHIT
@NAME is primp_neutral
NAME
Cute!
@NAME +1

readerMessage Confidence +1
@NAME exits left

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
COME OUT. We don't got all day!

@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat

@NAME enters from left to screen left
@NAME spot 1.280 54 -14 in zone 1

@NAME faces right

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Oscar! What's the rush? We have 20 minutes



    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
You're watch is wrong it's 8:16.

    OSCAR
Omg! what are you wearing?

    NAME
You like it.

    OSCAR
Yeah. cute and casual

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Listen I'm reventing myself this year meaning I need to look different.

@OSCAR is laugh_chuckle
@NAME is laugh_giggle

    NAME (blush_shy)
I'm reinventing myself this year I'm serious

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
You're perfect. You don't need to reinvent yourself.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
I want a life full of adventure and fun.

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Okay be careful don't leave me.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
I'd never leave you. You're my bestie.

@zoom on 0 399 to 199% in 0
@NAME is primp_neutral
@NAME is talk_agree_happy

    OSCAR (blush_shy)
(Could we ever be more?)

    NARRATOR (OSCAR)
Since we were little I was deeply in love with her. Since our first hello, since our first conversation. Her beautiful breathtaking eyes and her beautiful voluminous hair.

    NARRATOR
She looked so different today, she raidated confience and securtiry. It was refreshing. I've always loved her, but she took my breath away today.

@NAME is laugh_crackup
@pause for a beat
@zoom reset

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Come on let's get going.

@NAME exits right

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Wait for me!

@OSCAR exits right AND OSCAR is run_super_speed_loop

@transition fade out black

@NAME is laugh_crackup AND OSCAR is laugh_crackup
@transition fade out black
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT OL - DAY
&NAME spot 1.451 126 -57 in zone 1
&OSCAR spot 1.451 239 -57 in zone 3
@cut to zone 3
@OSCAR is idle_argument_angry_loop
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat

@cut to zone 1
@NAME is idle_argument_angry_loop
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
NARRATOR
In class it’s a battle field… not so friendly.
@NAME is raisehand_neutral
&OSCAR spot 1.451 239 -57 in zone 3
@cut to zone 3
@OSCAR is raisehand_neutral
@cut to zone 1

&NAME spot 1.451 126 -57 in zone 1
@NAME is raisehand_neutral
@cut to zone 3
@OSCAR is raisehand_neutral

@transition curtain out_left
INT. BLUE SCHOOL HALLWAY LOCKERS - DAY
@NAME spot 1.280 157 -25 in zone 1 AND NAME faces left
@OSCAR spot 1.280 44 24 in zone 1 AND OSCAR faces right

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Mrs. Kelly said I had more points.

    OSCAR (talk_sarcastic)
Well I had more last time

    NAME (talk_think_neutral)
So it's a tie, what should the tie breaker be?

    OSCAR
Who ever gets a higher mark on the geometry test tommorow.

    NAME (talk_primp_neutral)
Geometry is my subject.

    NAME (talk_argue_angry)
You're going down!

@OSCAR is blush_shy

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
I have a higher average in geometry

    NAME (talk_sarcastic)
By one percent. I made Mrs. Kelly cookies, I'm pretty sure she'll raise it to 100

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
We'll see!

@HAZEL enters from right to spot 1.280 190 -13

@NAME walks to upscreen left AND NAME faces left
@ZACKK enters from left to spot 1.280 271 27

    HAZEL (talk_sarcastic)
Babe! look they're competing over points again. Even with a hot outfit she's still a loser.

    HAZEL (talk_angry)
So fucking pathetic!

    HAZEL
    AND (NAME) your social life is non- existent. That new look won't help it.

    HAZEL
Whatever you do you can't fix yourself. You chase away the boys.


    HAZEL
Ooh and maybe girls too.

@NAME is react_angry_shakefists

    HAZEL (talk_sarcastic)
Aww baby she's mad!

    NAME (talk_angry)
Stop it

    HAZEL (talk_airquotes)
Or what? What are you going to do?

    NAME (idle_argument_angry_loop)
(She's been bullying me since grade 7.. what should I do?)

choice
“Stand up to her”{

    NAME
You know what you're just jealous.

    HAZEL
Jealous!! Of what!!

    NAME
You said it yourself love. I'm smart and now I'm actaually becoming confident.

    NAME
You're afriad because I don't care about looks, I won't to marry someone to be succesfull.

@HAZEL is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    HAZEL
You little-

    HAZEL
I'm not done love.

    HAZEL
I'm already planning to go to harvard for medicine.

    HAZEL
I'm going becme a doctor and be known of rfinfing the cure of cancer

    HAZEL
While you will be known for someone's wife.

@HAZEL is idle_argument_angry_loop

@ZACKK is idle_argument_angry_loop

    ZACKK
Honey let's go don't waste your breath on losers.

@NAME walks to screen left AND NAME faces right
@OSCAR walks to upscreen left AND OSCAR faces right

    OSCAR
Excuse me? That's my best friend.

@HAZEL walks to screen right AND HAZEL faces left
@ZACKK walks to screen center AND ZACKK faces left

@ZACKK is laugh_crackup
@OSCAR is idle_argument_angry_loop

    ZACKK
Why'd you say to me, twrp?

    OSCAR
I said f**k you. Don't talk about [NAME] like that ever agin.

ZACKK what are yu gonna do about it?

    OSCAR
I'd make you pay


    ZACKK
Take your best shot.

@OSCAR is punch_fight_give_angry AND ZACKK is punch_fight_receive_angry
@OSCAR is punch_fight_give_angry AND ZACKK is punch_fight_receive_angry

@transition iris out

INT. LIBRARY - DAY
@NAME enters from left to screen right

    NARRATOR
After 6 painful hours of being teased I was home. Yes I have my own library.

    NAME (talk_phone_happy_loop)
Oscar come over! I'm at the library.

    NAME (hangup_phone_angry)
Okay bye!

@pan to zone 2

@NAME enters from left to screen right

@NAME changes into NAME_default

@NAME faces left

    NAME (standup_neutral)
(OMG! Where's the end?)

@OSCAR changes into USUAL

@OSCAR faces right

@OSCAR walks to screen center

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
So! Today was really something. I'm tried of that school.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
You know how I said I'd be reinventing myself. I found a book. In the dust shelf. It was glowing.

@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to NAME

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
Let me see!

@remove Spell Book Open Grey Black from NAME

@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to OSCAR

    OSCAR (talk_think_neutral)
There's no end and middle!

    NAME (talk_apathetic)
That's not the werid part. Look at this.

    NAME (talk_whisper_worried)
It's back page has this page written in latin.

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
I got this! I happen to know | italic |LATIN

    NAME (idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Where did you learn LATIN!!

    OSCAR (blush_shy)
Summer Camp

@NAME is laugh_crackup

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Do you want me to translate or not.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Okay! Translate.

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
| italic , bold | 'Orbrothas est terra incidentia fuit. Et sanguis in circuitu. Omnes cantilenarum mortuus es. Dilaceratus est. Orbrothas est incidentia fuit.'

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
Omg!

    NAME (scream_angry)
Tell me!

    OSCAR (talk_afraid)
Calm down! Sheesh

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
It says 'Orbrothas is falling. And bloodshed is all around. All the melodies are dead. Torn into pieces. Obrothas is falling.'


    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Wow! Let's read the begnin-

    OSCAR (react_scream_horror)
What's happening?

    NAME (react_shocked_gasp)
MY BOOKS!

&zoom on 126 568 to 155% 0

@transition fade in black 1

@NAME spot 1.280 155 438 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is crowdsurf_excited_loop

@pause for a beat

&zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.3

@NAME walks to spot 1.280 155 -93 in 0.3 AND NAME does it while crowdsurf_excited_loop THEN NAME starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

sound car_crash
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@transition fade in black 1

@NAME spot 1.280 155 438 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is crowdsurf_excited_loop

@pause for a beat

&zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.3
@zoom reset
@zoom on 349 15 to 97% in 0

    OSCAR (talk_afraid)
No! Omg are you oka-

@OSCAR walks to spot 1.280 155 -93 in 0.3 AND OSCAR does it while crowdsurf_excited_loop THEN OSCAR starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

sound car_crash
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
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@transition fade out black

EXT. MOUNTAINS - DAY
@OSCAR is fall AND NAME is fall
@OSCAR is standup_neutral AND NAME is standup_neutral
@NAME walks to screen center

    OSCAR (talk_flashlight_scared)
Where are we? This is not Atlanta.

    NAME (talk_afraid)
What the hell!

    NARRATOR (OSCAR)
We're not in Atlanta! We're in Obrothas! We're stuck in the book.
A book with no ending!

@NAME is react_shocked_gasp
}

    NAME (talk_primp_neutral)
You know what you're just jealous.

    HAZEL (talk_argue_defensive)
Jealous!! Of what!!

    NAME (talk_primp_neutral)
You said it yourself love. I'm smart and now I'm actaually becoming confident.

    NAME (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
You're afriad because I don't care about looks, I won't to marry someone to be succesfull.

@HAZEL is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    HAZEL (talk_argue_angry)
You little-

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
I'm not done love.

    NAME (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
I'm already planning to go to harvard for medicine.

    NAME (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
I'm going becme a doctor and be known of the cure of cancer

    NAME (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
While you will be known for someone's wife.

@HAZEL is idle_argument_angry_loop
@OSCAR is laugh_crackup
@ZACKK is idle_argument_angry_loop

    ZACKK (talk_sarcastic)
Honey let's go don't waste your breath on losers.

@NAME walks to screen left AND NAME faces right
@OSCAR walks to upscreen left AND OSCAR faces right

    OSCAR (talk_argue_angry)
Excuse me? That's my best friend.

@HAZEL walks to screen right AND HAZEL faces left
@ZACKK walks to screen center AND ZACKK faces left

@ZACKK is laugh_crackup
@OSCAR is idle_argument_angry_loop

    ZACKK (talk_argue_angry)
Why'd you say to me, tewrp?

    OSCAR (talk_angry
I said f**k you. Don't talk about [NAME] like that ever agin.

    ZACKK (talk_agree_happy)
What are yu gonna do about it?

    OSCAR (talk_argue_angry)
I'd make you pay


    ZACKK (talk_agree_happy)
Take your best shot.

@HAZEL exits right AND HAZEL is walk_angry_loop

    NAME (talk_afraid)
Don't listen to him!

@OSCAR faces left

    OSCAR (talk_angry)
No I'm tired of this. They always do this. Leave okay after the pyscho b*tch left. We have no idea what she'll do.


    NAME (talk_unsure)
Are you sure?

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Go... I've been waiting for this my whole life.

@NAME exits left AND NAME is walk_runway_loop
@ZACKK walks to screen center
@OSCAR walks to screen left

@OSCAR is punch_fight_give_angry AND ZACKK is punch_fight_receive_angry
@OSCAR is punch_fight_give_angry AND ZACKK is punch_fight_receive_angry

@ZACKK is punch_fight_give_angry AND OSCAR is punch_fight_receive_angry
@OSCAR is punch_fight_give_angry AND ZACKK is punch_fight_receive_angry

    OSCAR (talk_argue_defensive)
Don't ever talk about ever again!

@transition iris out

INT. LIBRARY - DAY
@NAME enters from left to screen right

    NARRATOR
After 6 painful hours of being teased I was home. Yes I have my own library.

    NAME (talk_phone_happy_loop)
Oscar come over! I'm at the library.

    NAME (hangup_phone_angry)
Okay bye!

@pan to zone 2

@NAME enters from left to screen right

@NAME changes into NAME_default

@NAME faces left

    NAME (standup_neutral)
(OMG! Where's the end?)

@OSCAR changes into USUAL

@OSCAR faces right

@OSCAR walks to screen center

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
So! Today was really something. I'm tried of that school.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
You know how I said I'd be reinventing myself. I found a book. In the dust shelf. It was glowing.

@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to NAME

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
Let me see!

@remove Spell Book Open Grey Black from NAME

@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to OSCAR

    OSCAR (talk_think_neutral)
There's no end and middle!

    NAME (talk_apathetic)
That's not the weird part. Look at this.

    NAME (talk_whisper_worried)
It's back page has this page written in Latin.

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
I got this! I happen to know | italic |LATIN

    NAME (idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Where did you learn LATIN!!

    OSCAR (blush_shy)
Summer Camp

@NAME is laugh_crackup

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Do you want me to translate or not.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Okay! Translate.

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
| italic , bold | 'Orbrothas est terra incidentia fuit. Et sanguis in circuitu. Omnes cantilenarum mortuus es. Dilaceratus est. Orbrothas est incidentia fuit.'

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
Omg!

    NAME (scream_angry)
Tell me!

    OSCAR (talk_afraid)
Calm down! Sheesh

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
It says 'Orbrothas is falling. And bloodshed is all around. All the melodies are dead. Torn into pieces. Obrothas is falling.'


    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Wow! Let's read the begnin-

    OSCAR (react_scream_horror)
What's happening?

    NAME (react_shocked_gasp)
MY BOOKS!

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@transition fade in black 1

@NAME spot 1.280 155 438 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is crowdsurf_excited_loop

@pause for a beat

&zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.3

@NAME walks to spot 1.280 155 -93 in 0.3 AND NAME does it while crowdsurf_excited_loop THEN NAME starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

sound car_crash
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
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@transition fade in black 1

@NAME spot 1.280 155 438 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is crowdsurf_excited_loop

@pause for a beat

&zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.3
@zoom reset
@zoom on 349 15 to 97% in 0

    OSCAR (talk_afraid)
No! Omg are you oka-

@OSCAR walks to spot 1.280 155 -93 in 0.3 AND OSCAR does it while crowdsurf_excited_loop THEN OSCAR starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

sound car_crash
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1
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@transition fade out black

EXT. MOUNTAINS - DAY
@OSCAR is fall AND NAME is fall
@OSCAR is standup_neutral AND NAME is standup_neutral
@NAME walks to screen center

    OSCAR (talk_flashlight_scared)
Where are we? This is not Atlanta.

    NAME (talk_afraid)
What the hell!

    NARRATOR (OSCAR)
We're not in Atlanta! We're in Obrothas! We're stuck in the book.
A book with no ending!

@NAME is react_shocked_gasp

} “Don’t say anything.” {
@NAME is idle_awkward_scratch_loop
@OSCAR is idle_argument_angry_loop

    OSCAR
What the hell happened to us?

    OSCAR
We were so close! Our moms were besties and all gave birth in the same year.

    HAZEL
You know what happened? You guys left us.

    NAME
We left you, right when we entered high school you started bullying me.

    HAZEL
Well you're smart and had everything going for you. Populairity is all I had.

    NAME
So you took it out on me, instead asking me for help.

    HAZEL
I don't need your help.

@HAZEL exits right AND HAZEL walk_angry_loop
@ZACKK exits right AND ZACKK walk_angry_loop

@OSCAR walks to screen center AND OSCAR faces left

    OSCAR
You good?

    NAME (talk_angry)
I hate them.

    NAME (talk_sad)
She's right ain't she?

@NAME is cry_sniff_sad_loop

    OSCAR (talk_sad_serious_loop)
Of course not.

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
You're the most beautiful,smart and kind woman ever, I'm so glad you're my best friend. I love you.

    NAME
I love you too.

&OSCAR spot 1.280 109 -10 AND OSCAR faces right AND OSCAR is hug_rear AND OSCAR moves to layer 1
&NAME stands screen left AND NAME faces right AND NAME is hug AND NAME moves to layer -1

    OSCAR
Don't believe them.

@transtion fade out

INT. LIBRARY - DAY
@NAME enters from left to screen right

    NARRATOR
After 6 painful hours of being teased I was home. Yes I have my own library.

    NAME (talk_phone_happy_loop)
Oscar come over! I'm at the library.

    NAME (hangup_phone_angry)
Okay bye!

@pan to zone 2

@NAME enters from left to screen right

@NAME changes into NAME_default

@NAME faces left

    NAME (standup_neutral)
(OMG! Where's the end?)

@OSCAR changes into USUAL

@OSCAR faces right

@OSCAR walks to screen center

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
So! Today was really something. I'm tried of that school.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
You know how I said I'd be reinventing myself. I found a book. In the dust shelf. It was glowing.

@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to NAME

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
Let me see!

@remove Spell Book Open Grey Black from NAME

@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to OSCAR

    OSCAR (talk_think_neutral)
There's no end and middle!

    NAME (talk_apathetic)
That's not the weird part. Look at this.

    NAME (talk_whisper_worried)
It's back page has this page written in Latin.

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
I got this! I happen to know | italic |LATIN

    NAME (idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Where did you learn LATIN!!

    OSCAR (blush_shy)
Summer Camp

@NAME is laugh_crackup

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Do you want me to translate or not.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Okay! Translate.

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
| italic , bold | 'Orbrothas est terra incidentia fuit. Et sanguis in circuitu. Omnes cantilenarum mortuus es. Dilaceratus est. Orbrothas est incidentia fuit.'

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
Omg!

    NAME (scream_angry)
Tell me!

    OSCAR (talk_afraid)
Calm down! Sheesh

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
It says 'Orbrothas is falling. And bloodshed is all around. All the melodies are dead. Torn into pieces. Obrothas is falling.'


    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Wow! Let's read the begnin-

    OSCAR (react_scream_horror)
What's happening?

    NAME (react_shocked_gasp)
MY BOOKS!

&zoom on 126 568 to 155% 0

@transition fade in black 1

@NAME spot 1.280 155 438 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is crowdsurf_excited_loop

@pause for a beat

&zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.3

@NAME walks to spot 1.280 155 -93 in 0.3 AND NAME does it while crowdsurf_excited_loop THEN NAME starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

sound car_crash
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1
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&zoom on 0 100 to 100% 0
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@transition fade in black 1

@NAME spot 1.280 155 438 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is crowdsurf_excited_loop

@pause for a beat

&zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.3
@zoom reset
@zoom on 349 15 to 97% in 0

    OSCAR (talk_afraid)
No! Omg are you oka-

@OSCAR walks to spot 1.280 155 -93 in 0.3 AND OSCAR does it while crowdsurf_excited_loop THEN OSCAR starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

sound car_crash
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
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@transition fade out black

EXT. MOUNTAINS - DAY
@OSCAR is fall AND NAME is fall
@OSCAR is standup_neutral AND NAME is standup_neutral
@NAME walks to screen center

    OSCAR (talk_flashlight_scared)
Where are we? This is not Atlanta.

    NAME (talk_afraid)
What the hell!

    NARRATOR (OSCAR)
We're not in Atlanta! We're in Obrothas! We're stuck in the book.
A book with no ending!

{“Blending in”}
@NAME is idle_awkward_scratch_loop

    NAME
Blending in is my motto.


    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
COME OUT. We don't got all day!

@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat

@NAME enters from left to screen left
@NAME spot 1.280 54 -14 in zone 1

@NAME faces right

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Oscar! What's the rush? We have 20 minutes



    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
You're watch is wrong it's 8:16.

    OSCAR
Omg! what are you wearing?

    NAME
You like it.

    OSCAR
Yeah. but why.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Listen I'm reventing myself this year meaning I need to look different.

@OSCAR is laugh_chuckle
@NAME is laugh_giggle

    NAME (blush_shy)
I'm reinventing myself this year I'm serious

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
You're perfect. You don't need to reinvent yourself.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
I want a life full of adventure and fun.

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Okay be careful don't leave me.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
I'd never leave you. You're my bestie.

@zoom on 0 399 to 199% in 0
@NAME is primp_neutral
@NAME is talk_agree_happy

    OSCAR (blush_shy)
(Could we ever be more?)

    NARRATOR (OSCAR)
Since we were little I was deeply in love with her. Since our first hello, since our first conversation. Her beautiful breathtaking eyes and her beautiful voluminous hair.

    NARRATOR
She looked so different today, she raidated confience and securtiry. It was refreshing. I've always loved her, but she took my breath away today.

@NAME is laugh_crackup
@pause for a beat
@zoom reset

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Come on let's get going.

@NAME exits right

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Wait for me!

@OSCAR exits right AND OSCAR is run_super_speed_loop

@transition fade out black

@NAME is laugh_crackup AND OSCAR is laugh_crackup
@transition fade out black
INT. CLASSROOM FRONT OL - DAY
&NAME spot 1.451 126 -57 in zone 1
&OSCAR spot 1.451 239 -57 in zone 3
@cut to zone 3
@OSCAR is idle_argument_angry_loop
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat

@cut to zone 1
@NAME is idle_argument_angry_loop
@pause for a beat
@pause for a beat
NARRATOR
In class it’s a battle field… not so friendly.
@NAME is raisehand_neutral
&OSCAR spot 1.451 239 -57 in zone 3
@cut to zone 3
@OSCAR is raisehand_neutral
@cut to zone 1

&NAME spot 1.451 126 -57 in zone 1
@NAME is raisehand_neutral
@cut to zone 3
@OSCAR is raisehand_neutral

@transition curtain out_left
INT. BLUE SCHOOL HALLWAY LOCKERS - DAY
@NAME spot 1.280 157 -25 in zone 1 AND NAME faces left
@OSCAR spot 1.280 44 24 in zone 1 AND OSCAR faces right

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Mrs. Kelly said I had more points.

    OSCAR (talk_sarcastic)
Well I had more last time

    NAME (talk_think_neutral)
So it's a tie, what should the tie breaker be?

    OSCAR
Who ever gets a higher mark on the geometry test tommorrow

    NAME (talk_primp_neutral)
Geometry is my subject.

    NAME (talk_argue_angry)
You're going down!

@OSCAR is blush_shy

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
I have a higher average in geometry

    NAME (talk_sarcastic)
By one percent. I made Mrs. Kelly cookies, I'm pretty sure she'll raise it to 100

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
We'll see!

@HAZEL enters from right to spot 1.280 190 -13

@NAME walks to upscreen left AND NAME faces left
@ZACKK enters from left to spot 1.280 271 27

    HAZEL (talk_sarcastic)
Babe! look they're competing over points again. She's still a loser.

    HAZEL (talk_angry)
So fucking pathetic!

    HAZEL
    AND (NAME) your social life is non- existent. That new look won't help it.

    HAZEL
Whatever you do you can't fix yourself. You chase away the boys.


    HAZEL
Ooh and maybe girls too.

@NAME is react_angry_shakefists

    HAZEL (talk_sarcastic)
Aww baby she's mad!

    NAME (talk_angry)
Stop it

    HAZEL (talk_airquotes)
Or what? What are you going to do?

    NAME (idle_argument_angry_loop)
(She's been bullying me since grade 7.. what should I do?)

choice
“Stand up to her”{

    NAME
You know what you're just jealous.

    HAZEL
Jealous!! Of what!!

    NAME
You said it yourself love. I'm smart and now I'm actaually becoming confident.

    NAME
You're afriad because I don't care about looks, I won't have to marry someone to be succesfull.

@HAZEL is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    HAZEL
You little-

    NAME
I'm not done love.

    HAZEL
I'm already planning to go to harvard for medicine.

    HAZEL
I'm going becme a doctor and be known of rfinfing the cure of cancer

    HAZEL
While you will be known for someone's wife.

@HAZEL is idle_argument_angry_loop

@ZACKK is idle_argument_angry_loop

    ZACKK
Honey let's go don't waste your breath on losers.

@NAME walks to screen left AND NAME faces right
@OSCAR walks to upscreen left AND OSCAR faces right

    OSCAR
Excuse me? That's my best friend.

@HAZEL walks to screen right AND HAZEL faces left
@ZACKK walks to screen center AND ZACKK faces left

@ZACKK is laugh_crackup
@OSCAR is idle_argument_angry_loop

    ZACKK
Why'd you say to me, twrp?

    OSCAR
I said f**k you. Don't talk about [NAME] like that ever agin.

ZACKK what are yu gonna do about it?

    OSCAR
I'd make you pay


    ZACKK
Take your best shot.

@OSCAR is punch_fight_give_angry AND ZACKK is punch_fight_receive_angry
@OSCAR is punch_fight_give_angry AND ZACKK is punch_fight_receive_angry

@transition iris out

INT. LIBRARY - DAY
@NAME enters from left to screen right

    NARRATOR
After 6 painful hours of being teased I was home. Yes I have my own library.

    NAME (talk_phone_happy_loop)
Oscar come over! I'm at the library.

    NAME (hangup_phone_angry)
Okay bye!

@pan to zone 2

@NAME enters from left to screen right

@NAME changes into NAME_default

@NAME faces left

    NAME (standup_neutral)
(OMG! Where's the end?)

@OSCAR changes into USUAL

@OSCAR faces right

@OSCAR walks to screen center

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
So! Today was really something. I'm tried of that school.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
You know how I said I'd be reinventing myself. I found a book. In the dust shelf. It was glowing.

@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to NAME

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
Let me see!

@remove Spell Book Open Grey Black from NAME

@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to OSCAR

    OSCAR (talk_think_neutral)
There's no end and middle!

    NAME (talk_apathetic)
That's not the werid part. Look at this.

    NAME (talk_whisper_worried)
It's back page has this page written in latin.

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
I got this! I happen to know | italic |LATIN

    NAME (idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Where did you learn LATIN!!

    OSCAR (blush_shy)
Summer Camp

@NAME is laugh_crackup

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Do you want me to translate or not.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Okay! Translate.

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
| italic , bold | 'Orbrothas est terra incidentia fuit. Et sanguis in circuitu. Omnes cantilenarum mortuus es. Dilaceratus est. Orbrothas est incidentia fuit.'

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
Omg!

    NAME (scream_angry)
Tell me

    OSCAR (talk_afraid)
Calm down! Sheesh

    OSCAR
It's pretty simple.

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
It says 'Orbrothas is falling. And bloodshed is all around. All the melodies are dead. Torn into pieces. Obrothas is falling.'


    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Wow! Let's read the begnin-

    OSCAR (react_scream_horror)
What's happening?

    NAME (react_shocked_gasp)
MY BOOKS!

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@transition fade in black 1

@NAME spot 1.280 155 438 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is crowdsurf_excited_loop

@pause for a beat

&zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.3

@NAME walks to spot 1.280 155 -93 in 0.3 AND NAME does it while crowdsurf_excited_loop THEN NAME starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

sound car_crash
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1
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&zoom on 0 100 to 100% 0
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@transition fade in black 1

@NAME spot 1.280 155 438 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is crowdsurf_excited_loop

@pause for a beat

&zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.3
@zoom reset
@zoom on 349 15 to 97% in 0

    OSCAR (talk_afraid)
No! Omg are you oka-

@OSCAR walks to spot 1.280 155 -93 in 0.3 AND OSCAR does it while crowdsurf_excited_loop THEN OSCAR starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

sound car_crash
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1

&zoom on 0 100 to 100% 0
&zoom on 126 568 to 155% 0
@zoom reset
@zoom reset
@zoom reset

@transition fade out black

EXT. MOUNTAINS - DAY
@OSCAR is fall AND NAME is fall
@OSCAR is standup_neutral AND NAME is standup_neutral
@NAME walks to screen center

    OSCAR (talk_flashlight_scared)
Where are we? This is not Atlanta.

    NAME (talk_afraid)
What the hell!

    NARRATOR (OSCAR)
We're not in Atlanta! We're in Obrothas! We're stuck in the book.
A book with no ending!

@NAME is react_shocked_gasp
} “Don’t say anything.” {
@NAME is idle_awkward_scratch_loop
@OSCAR is idle_argument_angry_loop

    OSCAR
What the hell happened to us?

    OSCAR
We were so close! Our moms were besties and all gave birth in the same year.

    HAZEL
You know what happened? You guys left us.

    NAME
We left you, right when we entered high school you started bullying me.

    HAZEL
Well you're smart and had everything going for you. Populairity is all I had.

    NAME
So you took it out on me, instead asking me for help.

    HAZEL
I don't need your help.

@HAZEL exits right

    NAME (talk_primp_neutral)
You know what you're just jealous.

    HAZEL (talk_argue_defensive)
Jealous!! Of what!!

    NAME (talk_primp_neutral)
You said it yourself love. I'm smart and now I'm actaually becoming confident.

    NAME (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
You're afriad because I don't care about looks, I won't to marry someone to be succesfull.

@HAZEL is idle_armscrossed_angry_loop

    HAZEL (talk_argue_angry)
You little-

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
I'm not done love.

    NAME (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
I'm already planning to go to harvard for medicine.

    NAME (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
I'm going becme a doctor and be known of the cure of cancer

    NAME (talk_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
While you will be known for someone's wife.

@HAZEL is idle_argument_angry_loop
@OSCAR is laugh_crackup
@ZACKK is idle_argument_angry_loop

    ZACKK (talk_sarcastic)
Honey let's go don't waste your breath on losers.

@NAME walks to screen left AND NAME faces right
@OSCAR walks to upscreen left AND OSCAR faces right

    OSCAR (talk_argue_angry)
Excuse me? That's my best friend.

@HAZEL walks to screen right AND HAZEL faces left
@ZACKK walks to screen center AND ZACKK faces left

@ZACKK is laugh_crackup
@OSCAR is idle_argument_angry_loop

    ZACKK (talk_argue_angry)
Why'd you say to me, tewrp?

    OSCAR (talk_angry
I said f**k you. Don't talk about [NAME] like that ever agin.

    ZACKK (talk_agree_happy)
What are yu gonna do about it?

    OSCAR (talk_argue_angry)
I'd make you pay


    ZACKK (talk_agree_happy)
Take your best shot.

@HAZEL exits right AND HAZEL is walk_angry_loop

    NAME (talk_afraid)
Don't listen to him!

@OSCAR faces left

    OSCAR (talk_angry)
No I'm tired of this. They always do this. Leave okay after the pyscho b*tch left. We have no idea what she'll do.


    NAME (talk_unsure)
Are you sure?

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Go... I've been waiting for this my whole life.

@NAME exits left AND NAME is walk_runway_loop
@ZACKK walks to screen center
@OSCAR walks to screen left

@OSCAR is punch_fight_give_angry AND ZACKK is punch_fight_receive_angry
@OSCAR is punch_fight_give_angry AND ZACKK is punch_fight_receive_angry

@ZACKK is punch_fight_give_angry AND OSCAR is punch_fight_receive_angry
@OSCAR is punch_fight_give_angry AND ZACKK is punch_fight_receive_angry

    OSCAR (talk_argue_defensive)
Don't ever talk about her ever again!

@transition iris out

INT. LIBRARY - DAY
@NAME enters from left to screen right

    NARRATOR
After 6 painful hours of being teased I was home. Yes I have my own library.

    NAME (talk_phone_happy_loop)
Oscar come over! I'm at the library.

    NAME (hangup_phone_angry)
Okay bye!

@pan to zone 2

@NAME enters from left to screen right

@NAME changes into NAME_default

@NAME faces left

    NAME (standup_neutral)
(OMG! Where's the end?)

@OSCAR changes into USUAL

@OSCAR faces right

@OSCAR walks to screen center

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
So! Today was really something. I'm tried of that school.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
You know how I said I'd be reinventing myself. I found a book. In the dust shelf. It was glowing.

@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to NAME

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
Let me see!

@remove Spell Book Open Grey Black from NAME

@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to OSCAR

    OSCAR (talk_think_neutral)
There's no end and middle!

    NAME (talk_apathetic)
That's not the weird part. Look at this.

    NAME (talk_whisper_worried)
It's back page has this page written in Latin.

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
I got this! I happen to know | italic |LATIN

    NAME (idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Where did you learn LATIN!!

    OSCAR (blush_shy)
Summer Camp

@NAME is laugh_crackup

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Do you want me to translate or not.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Okay! Translate.

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
| italic , bold | 'Orbrothas est terra incidentia fuit. Et sanguis in circuitu. Omnes cantilenarum mortuus es. Dilaceratus est. Orbrothas est incidentia fuit.'

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
Omg!

    NAME (scream_angry)
Tell me!

    OSCAR (talk_afraid)
Calm down! Sheesh

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
It says 'Orbrothas is falling. And bloodshed is all around. All the melodies are dead. Torn into pieces. Obrothas is falling.'


    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Wow! Let's read the begnin-

    OSCAR (react_scream_horror)
What's happening?

    NAME (react_shocked_gasp)
MY BOOKS!

&zoom on 126 568 to 155% 0

@transition fade in black 1

@NAME spot 1.280 155 438 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is crowdsurf_excited_loop

@pause for a beat

&zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.3

@NAME walks to spot 1.280 155 -93 in 0.3 AND NAME does it while crowdsurf_excited_loop THEN NAME starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

sound car_crash
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1

&zoom on 0 100 to 100% 0
&zoom on 126 568 to 155% 0

@transition fade in black 1

@NAME spot 1.280 155 438 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is crowdsurf_excited_loop

@pause for a beat

&zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.3
@zoom reset
@zoom on 349 15 to 97% in 0

    OSCAR (talk_afraid)
No! Omg are you oka-

@OSCAR walks to spot 1.280 155 -93 in 0.3 AND OSCAR does it while crowdsurf_excited_loop THEN OSCAR starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

sound car_crash
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1

&zoom on 0 100 to 100% 0
&zoom on 126 568 to 155% 0
@zoom reset
@zoom reset
@zoom reset

@transition fade out black

EXT. MOUNTAINS - DAY
@OSCAR is fall AND NAME is fall
@OSCAR is standup_neutral AND NAME is standup_neutral
@NAME walks to screen center

    OSCAR (talk_flashlight_scared)
Where are we? This is not Atlanta.

    NAME (talk_afraid)
What the hell!

    NARRATOR (OSCAR)
We're not in Atlanta! We're in Obrothas! We're stuck in the book.
A book with no ending!

@NAME is react_shocked_gasp

} “Don’t say anything.” {
@NAME is idle_awkward_scratch_loop
@OSCAR is idle_argument_angry_loop

    OSCAR
What the hell happened to us?

    OSCAR
We were so close! Our moms were besties and all gave birth in the same year.

    HAZEL
You know what happened? You guys left us.

    NAME
We left you, right when we entered high school you started bullying me.

    HAZEL
Well you're smart and had everything going for you. Populairity is all I had.

    NAME
So you took it out on me, instead asking me for help.

    HAZEL
I don't need your help.

@HAZEL exits right AND HAZEL walk_angry_loop
@ZACKK exits right AND ZACKK walk_angry_loop

@OSCAR walks to screen center AND OSCAR faces left

    OSCAR
You good?

    NAME (talk_angry)
I hate them.

    NAME (talk_sad)
She's right ain't she?

@NAME is cry_sniff_sad_loop

    OSCAR (talk_sad_serious_loop)
Of course not.

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
You're the most beautiful,smart and kind woman ever, I'm so glad you're my best friend. I love you.

    NAME
I love you too.

&OSCAR spot 1.280 109 -10 AND OSCAR faces right AND OSCAR is hug_rear AND OSCAR moves to layer 1
&NAME stands screen left AND NAME faces right AND NAME is hug AND NAME moves to layer -1

    OSCAR
Don't believe them.

@transtion fade out

INT. LIBRARY - DAY
@NAME enters from left to screen right

    NARRATOR
After 6 painful hours of being teased I was home. Yes I have my own library.

    NAME (talk_phone_happy_loop)
Oscar come over! I'm at the library.

    NAME (hangup_phone_angry)
Okay bye!

@pan to zone 2

@NAME enters from left to screen right

@NAME changes into NAME_default

@NAME faces left

    NAME (standup_neutral)
(OMG! Where's the end?)

@OSCAR changes into USUAL

@OSCAR faces right

@OSCAR walks to screen center

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
So! Today was really something. I'm tried of that school.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
You know how I said I'd be reinventing myself. I found a book. In the dust shelf. It was glowing.

@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to NAME

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
Let me see!

@remove Spell Book Open Grey Black from NAME

@add Spell Book Open Grey Black to OSCAR

    OSCAR (talk_think_neutral)
There's no end and middle!

    NAME (talk_apathetic)
That's not the weird part. Look at this.

    NAME (talk_whisper_worried)
It's back page has this page written in Latin.

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
I got this! I happen to know | italic |LATIN

    NAME (idle_armscrossed_neutral_loop)
Where did you learn LATIN!!

    OSCAR (blush_shy)
Summer Camp

@NAME is laugh_crackup

    OSCAR (talk_agree_happy)
Do you want me to translate or not.

    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Okay! Translate.

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
| italic , bold | 'Orbrothas est terra incidentia fuit. Et sanguis in circuitu. Omnes cantilenarum mortuus es. Dilaceratus est. Orbrothas est incidentia fuit.'

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
Omg!

    NAME (scream_angry)
Tell me!

    OSCAR (talk_afraid)
Calm down! Sheesh

    OSCAR (talk_apathetic)
It says 'Orbrothas is falling. And bloodshed is all around. All the melodies are dead. Torn into pieces. Obrothas is falling.'


    NAME (talk_agree_happy)
Wow! Let's read the begnin-

    OSCAR (react_scream_horror)
What's happening?

    NAME (react_shocked_gasp)
MY BOOKS!

&zoom on 126 568 to 155% 0

@transition fade in black 1

@NAME spot 1.280 155 438 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is crowdsurf_excited_loop

@pause for a beat

&zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.3

@NAME walks to spot 1.280 155 -93 in 0.3 AND NAME does it while crowdsurf_excited_loop THEN NAME starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

sound car_crash
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1

&zoom on 0 100 to 100% 0
&zoom on 126 568 to 155% 0

@transition fade in black 1

@NAME spot 1.280 155 438 AND NAME faces left AND NAME is crowdsurf_excited_loop

@pause for a beat

&zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.3
@zoom reset
@zoom on 349 15 to 97% in 0

    OSCAR (talk_afraid)
No! Omg are you oka-

@OSCAR walks to spot 1.280 155 -93 in 0.3 AND OSCAR does it while crowdsurf_excited_loop THEN OSCAR starts sleep_lay_uncomfortable_loop

sound car_crash
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 160 to 155% 0.1
@zoom on 126 0 to 155% 0.1

&zoom on 0 100 to 100% 0
&zoom on 126 568 to 155% 0
@zoom reset
@zoom reset
@zoom reset

@transition fade out black

EXT. MOUNTAINS - DAY
@OSCAR is fall AND NAME is fall
@OSCAR is standup_neutral AND NAME is standup_neutral
@NAME walks to screen center

    OSCAR (talk_flashlight_scared)
Where are we? This is not Atlanta.

    NAME (talk_afraid)
What the hell!

    NARRATOR (OSCAR)
We're not in Atlanta! We're in Obrothas! We're stuck in the book.
A book with no ending!

}

Give me a few minutes as I read over it, that is a lot lol :joy:

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yah I know I get a headache reading it

I did a quick glance over as it’s a lot. I’m quoting the choices here. You have error in it.

You have three main choices, correct? Bangin, cute casual and Blending in. In each choice, you want two options - Stand up for her and don’t say anything right?

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yeah

what are the errors???

Sorry give me a few mins, I’m trying to quote your code but my phone is freezing on me, and it’s a lot :sob:

Then erase this part from the CUTE CASUAL path (you have it already)

IT SHOULD BE:

You have “Don’t say anything” twice in the blending in choice.

At the end:

You can read more here: 🍀 HOW TO: Choice Inside Choice :yay:

So:

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so it what you written how it should be or is it the error filled one?

Use this template, where it says #scene or #scene here, just copy and paste the code there. For example, for “Stand up to her” you’d paste that whole scene about standing up to her under “Stand up to her.” Hope this makes sense, I tried to simplify it as much as possible.

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  • Should be spelled transition btw
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