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#21

Heyo! Thanks for taking the time to do this, I really appreciate it.

Cover art (pending):

Story Title: Blind Starlight

Author: Chelsea Alexis

Genre: Fantasy

Story Description: Misread as the lost princess of Aetheria kicks off your wild adventure through time and space.

Story Style: Limelight

Number of Chapters: 4. Working on five.

Episode Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6524977897930752

Any particular aspect you’d like me to look at?
I’d like to know if you think my story is too rushed, and what you think of the general plot.


#22

Hi! Thank for creating this thread! I`d love to get a review!
Story title: Let the demon inside


Author: Nierido
Genre: Supernatural romance
Description: You have to move back to Dimwood. What will you find there? Love, death or supernatural friends?
Number of episodes:5
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4876381520789504


#23

Hello, @Once

Thank you for creating this thread!

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Story Title: The Night Hawk
Author: Jill Popsicle
Genre: Romance, Mystery, Action
Story Description: After a life-saving encounter Ires is drawn to a mysterious stranger only to find out that being around him could potentially kill her.
Story Style (Classic, Ink, Limelight, Spotlight): Ink
Number of Chapters: 3
Episode Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6752282445479936
Additional Information: It is my first story and English is not my first language
Any particular aspect you’d like me to look at?: Whether you would keep reading it? And I have seen your reviews here, they are very good! I would like positive feedback of course, but I am mostly looking for what needs to be imprved. So, no need to be polite)


#24

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Story Title: For The Love Of The Gang
Author: Miss Mac
Genre: Romance/Drama
Story Description:
Lucia has been in and out of foster homes since the age of 6 due to dramatic events in her past. That was until she was found by her uncle who had been searching for her for years. Lucia now has to get used to a new town, home and school while dealing with her traumatic past. The past doesn’t stay in the past when secrets, lies and new revelations come to light! Mature themes, choices, love, bad boys, thrills, action and much more. You don’t want to miss this. Let’s see how Lucia’s life unfolds when she meets bad boy Romeo!
Story Style (Classic, Ink, Limelight, Spotlight): Ink
Number of Chapters: 8 (ongoing)
Episode Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5815833123487744
Additional Information: Instagram missmac.episodes
Any particular aspect you’d like me to look at?: All comments and feedback welcomed.


#25

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Story Title: Sophisticated & Deceived
Author: Briana M.
Genre: Romance
Story Description: Ashden, a 26 year old young woman learns that life isn’t about being emotionless and too sophisticated. Will a guy help her explore her emotions in life?
Story Style (Classic, Ink, Limelight, Spotlight): Ink
Number of Chapters: 14 ~ONGOING~
Episode Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5716365262585856
Additional Information: No
Any particular aspect you’d like me to look at?: Overall story plot & directing :slight_smile:


#26


Hello, everyone! Thank you for all the requests. :3 I’ve already begun reading through your stories. Unfortunately, the reviews I had written weren’t properly saved, and as a result, unexpectedly deleted. This is only a minor setback, but I promise I will be continuing. I will keep everyone updated on my progress, and will complete all of your reviews no matter what.

In addition, if there is anything you think I am doing well or could be doing better as a reviewer, please keep me informed. I’m still learning, and I welcome any constructive cristism on how I can improve.

Thank you for your patience! ^-^


Queue

:pen: “H & V: From Zero to Hero” by Dr.Smile (Chapter one)
:pen: “Choose?!!!” by ya (Chapter one)
:pen: Fantastical: Silhouettes by aprilish (Chapter one)
:pen: “From This Day Fowards” by goth.gaia (Chapter one)
:pen: “Girl of Deception” by IDONTKNOW (Chapter two)
:pen: “H & V: Taming him (CC)” by UnknownSnowflake (Chapter one)
:pen: “DEMIGODDESS” by Giselle Cresent (Chapter one)
:pen: “Publicity Problems” by Karlon Artis (Chapter two)
:pen: “Blind Starlight” by Chelsea Alexis (Chapter one)
:pen: “Let the Demon Inside” by Nierido (Chapter one)
:pen: “The Night Hawk” by Jill Popsicle (Chapter one)
:pen: “For The Love Of The Gang” by Miss Mac (Chapter one)
:pen: “Sophisticated & Deceived” by Briana M. (Chapter one)


#27

Hey there! I’d love if you read the I co create for the DD Contest! :blush:

Title: DD SHATTERED
Authors: @CeCeWrites.Episode and Jane
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 3 (on going)
Link: DD SHATTERED


#28

Hi,
I just published my story and I would love it if you would give it a read!

Story Title: In a Starry Night
Author Name: Fatima Al star
Style: Limelight
Genre: Romance/drama
Episodes: 3 (more coming soon!)
Story Description: Rose goes thorough a lot of difficulties that will lead her to find secrets that were hidden for years! Will she ever find happiness and love? (Choices matter)
Instagram Name: @fatima_stories
Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5756418218131456

Story cover

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Enjoy!


#29

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Story Title: Thrill of the Hunt
Author: Azaria Sin or azariasin in-app
Genre: Mystery/Thriller/murder-mystery, though I’ve added it under the Romance option out of more acknowledgment :confused: Romance is secondary, though there’s more than enough comedic factors too.
Story Description: A deranged serial killer is hunting street workers! You’re a detective paired with an alluring man : will you capture the murderer while battling lust & inner demons?
Story Style (Classic, Ink, Limelight, Spotlight): Ink
Number of Chapters: 10 so far (season 1 ending)
Episode Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6661570308734976
Additional Information: Has CC. Extensive for both MC and your colleague. In-game descriptions and art (like the cover) describe MY depiction of said colleague though, but you can still customize however you like (I like seeing multiple depictions and creativity:) )
Any particular aspect you’d like me to look at?: Directing first, then plot/character development. I feel like I’m more confident in story-telling but since this is my first time writing for EPISODE (not in general), I’d like to know if it’s appealing. Grammar and storytelling follows up too.


#30

Title: Amazing Inside
Author: AlessGluX
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Description: Can Emma control her emotion when she realize they come out and talk to her!! Can she balance love, family and friendship before a mystery power come and destroy everything.
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5843577419464704 1 2 1 1

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#31

Hi there! Could you review my story? I understand you have a lot of requests and I don’t mind the wait. Thank you :smiley:

These are the details of my story:

WATCH MY STORY’S TRAILER: LINK TO TRAILER

Title: Loving You Again

Author: Fluffy Rice

Style: Limelight

Chapters: 7 (Ongoing)

Genre: Romantic Comedy

Description: Childhood friends reunited after 10 years. Sierra & Peter reunite after an unexpected meeting. How can they mend their friendship to account for the missing years they were apart?

This story is based on a true story, my life actually.

Instagram: @fluffyrice.episode

LINK: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4771951097544704


#32

Hey!
I would love to get a feedback on my story!

Title: Teacher or Queen?
Author: Mystique
Genre: drama
Story description: After years of searching she had finally found them. Can she get close them? Her destiny is about to change forever. What will she choose?
*Only first TWO episodes out!
Story style: Limelight
Number of chapters: I have only published the first two ones (the third one is blank)
Particular aspect: I would like to get a little review of everything :smile: but maybe mostly the impression - if you would continue reading, if the plot seems interesting and worthy to continue etc. This is the most important part for me - on the other I can work on but the overall impression is something different.

Additional information: This is my very first Episode writing experience (also first experience in writing something longer in English). I would like to get some sort of first impression feedback to improve my story before I continue any further.

Small cover:

Large cover:

Thank you :blush:


#33

Cover Art: Cover: bb7fc107e5e8ffd4fa273e35ce11aa1f4b91ecf3_1_361x500
Story Title: Kotton Kandie
Author: PrettyEri
Genre: Comedy
Story Description: Kandie’s finally free from an abusive marriage. Now it’s time for her to start anew - with a stalkerish ex-husband on her tail. Help her navigate through life. Choices matter.
Story Style (Classic, Ink, Limelight, Spotlight): Ink
Number of Chapters: 6
Episode Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5532581127127040
Additional Information: No
Any particular aspect you’d like me to look at?: No


#34

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Story Title: The Final Girl
Author: Mindy
Genre: Horror
Story Description: Quinn is going on a trip with her friends but will she make it out alive?
Story Style (Classic, Ink, Limelight, Spotlight): limelight
Number of Chapters: 4
Episode Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4553364898447360

Any particular aspect you’d like me to look at?: story line and directing


#35

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Tittle : Search for love
Author : Sigma.fr
Genre : Drama
Story Description : Your life turns upside down when you try to escape from a toxic situation! Can you find the love you are looking for trying to escape?
Story style : Ink
Number of Chapters : 7 (more coming soon)


#36

I just saw this post now.
Please check out mine and let me know what you think!
Name: Opposite in Harmony
Author: Pheebsnomenal
Genre: fantasy/adventure/romance
After 1412 years, Aimie finally decides to visit Earth and that is when her life turns up side down. She finds out that sometimes you can’t judge a book by it’s cover. Her perfect family seems to be hiding all kind of secrets from her and her new demons friends always protect her from evil. Will she ever find her way back to her family even if that means living a lie? Or will she choose to abandon everything she ever knew and live an honest life with her new friends?

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#37

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Story Title: Puppy Love
Author: Lou
Genre: Romance/ Fantasy
Story Description:
Jason caught himself in a CRAZY, complicated situation. Watch out on how he will handle his true feelings for Alli. Will he be able to admit he’s falling for her after finding out she’s his puppy??
Story Style (Classic, Ink, Limelight, Spotlight): Limelight
Number of Chapters: 7 ongoing
Episode Story Link: https://www.episodeinteractive.com/s/5630801559027712
Additional Information: English is not my first language.
Any particular aspect you’d like me to look at?: Was there a problem with the story idea?? Was it very unbelievable that few people would like it??

@Once Thank you so much for this. I am looking forward in hearing your comments and feedback.
:blue_heart::blue_heart::blue_heart:


#38

Good evening ! Here is my story, I would really love a feedback :purple_heart:

Title : O Negative
Author : Bunny Tudor
Genre : Romance/Fantasy
Description : Rose is an idealistic dreamer who finds herself haunted by her long time crush. He keeps talking to her in her sleep, and appearing in her head. But soon she’ll realise he’s far from being human, doomed for eternity by a sickness he can’t fight, hiding dark secrets from the girl he keeps haunting.
Story style : Limelight
Episodes : 4
Link : http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6003458991587328
Cover art :

Thank you a lot for doing this ! :purple_heart:


#39

quick question does my story have to be published


#40

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Story Title: Midnight Memories
Author: Evija
Genre: Romance
Story Description: Ayla flies all the way from Ireland to somewhere in America, when she’s supposed to spend a summer in some kind of rehabilitation center for people with anorexia.
Story Style (Classic, Ink, Limelight, Spotlight): Limelight
Number of Chapters: 16
Episode Story Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5689448274984960
Additional Information: I’m not trying to offend anyone and am not using disorders for entertainment.
Any particular aspect you’d like me to look at?: The first chapter is customization so the actual story starts at 2nd chapter.