One Chapter Challenge

Hello all! I published my first story about a month ago, and I’d like to get some feedback and criticism. My petition is this: Just read the first chapter. If you don’t like it, I’m sorry I wasted your time, but hey - at least you didn’t waste passes! If you end up liking it and reading past the first chapter, it’s a win-win :slight_smile:
If you don’t read it at all… that’s okay too. Story info below:
Title: Shifter
Author name: Aurrorah
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Description: How does the story of an unwanted orphan placed in the foster home of an eccentric doctor end up so packed with romance, drama, and the supernatural? YOU decide!
Length: 10 episodes


Hey, nice cover !!
We could do a read for read if you want ? :slight_smile:

But first: For a guaranteed feedback fill in the form

Link below :

Here is the description of my story :slight_smile:

Title : Paradise
Author : Maggy

Genre : Fantasy
Style : Limelight
Number of episodes : 10 (more episodes coming soon)
Instagram : maggy.episode

Description : A young adult called Fidelia is about to become a Goddess, she has to follow the prophecy. Fidelia is strong and independent, fun, and a crazy party girl. Will she accept her faith?

Link :


I read the first chapter and woah… I normally don’t like limelight so much but i don’t care in this story :smile: The first chapter was very good! Ugh it left me so hanging here :smile: I’ll definitely go and read more :wink: it would be great if there were some music but it isn’t that important, and i don’t know if there is in future chapters so…

1 Like

Sure! I will only read the first chapter though (because that’s all I’m asking for), and will read more if I like the story enough!

1 Like

There is music added later! I’m glad you like it :smiley:

1 Like

Thank you :slight_smile: xo

Yeah that’s what i doubted so :blush:

I’ll add it to my favs and read the first Episode :sunglasses:

1 Like


TITLE : God’s Daughter
GENRE : Fantasy
DESCRIPTION : War of the ages, lost hope, missing people is there room for love in a world of Evil and Good. Especially for Gods Daughter and Satans Son.
EPISODE : 3 (Ongoing)

Can we do a read for read? :slight_smile:

My story:

Title: Nocturnal
Author: CrazyCreativeMind
Episodes: 4 (More episodes coming soon)
Genre: Horror, romance
Style: Limelight
Description: It’s been a year since Eli’s sister was taken by soul-devouring demons. Now, they have come back for him and won’t stop until his sanity is lost and his soul is captured.