Welcome to my review thread, fellow Episoder.
I haven’t done a whole lot of promoting for my contest entry, so I figured I should start a thread. However, I do not want it to be like every other thread on the forums.
For this particular thread, you’re welcome to either drop your story upon adhering to my R4R rules, or you can read my story first to get to the very top of my reading list.
I will be giving a constructive review upon reading the first three episodes of your story. I will not hurt your feelings, but you will know exactly what needs work, what I enjoyed, and any plotholes/suggestions I feel the need to point out.
The rules for this R4R are simple. All I ask of you is to please comment your story only if you’re accepting that I will give an honest review of your story. Do not attack me or get angry if I say something you didn’t want to hear. I tend to be very polite even if I don’t like something, but you will for sure know. Also, I only have THREE episodes. Therefore, I will only read THREE of your episodes, front to back. Reviews will be sent via DM.
That’s all. I hope this thread doesn’t flop!
My story details for the R4R!
Title: DD: Connected by Fate
Description: After yet another bad date, you cave into an ad you saw on EpiTok by a psychic who claims she can draw your soulmate. Can you keep them once you’ve tracked them down?
Genre: Adventure/Rom-Com
Style: Limelight
Episodes: 3
Offers: Full CC including some body variations, name + last name, choose sexuality and fully customizable love interest (including name & last name), choices matter, two endings, minigames, and point system.
Author IG: @mjay_writes
Cover:
hi there! thank you so much for this thread! my story is called Utopia, and I’d be delighted to do an r4r with you! i love supporting the contests, and fun fact, i’ve read your story for fun and absolutely loved it! to support you, i’ll re-read it and send proof of a re-read! best of luck with everything here are my story details:
story: Utopia
genre: Sci-Fi
style: Limelight
episodes: 6 (more coming soon)
Full CC, 1 LI M/F (LGBT friendly)
Description: It’s 2169 and Bakerdale is the only place left on Earth to live. In a city fueled by perfectionism, what happens when you discover the only flaw is society itself?
here’s my screenshots! i hope this is enough proof to show i’ve read it also i love the rapping part it’s so funny so i added a separate collage of my rap lol! i’m seriously in love with you story; the directing is absolutely flawless and i love the personalities of the characters! i feel like i can seriously relate to the mc! and austin’s freckles are gorgeous!! the only thing i wish i could do is check my character development points, but i know how tedious it is to code the check points thing, so i get it. once again, fantastic job! i hope you win the contest because you deserve it
Interested! I’ve seen your story before and it’s been on my DD reading list! I’ll send you my screenshots soon
Title: Treasure In You Author: L.Q. Walter Instagram: @lqwalter.episode Genre: Adventure/Romance Chapters: 12 (Season 1 COMPLETE) Style: Limelight Description: After discovering an old diary she believes will lead her to the location of a long lost treasure, she teams with an unlikely ally: a flirty, party boy who is nothing but trouble! Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5342141547216896 Cover:
Hi♡︎
I would appreaciate if you could read my story and give me your honest feedback💕.
Title: 𝑰 𝑾𝒊𝒍𝒍 𝑨𝒍𝒘𝒂𝒚𝒔 𝑹𝒆𝒎𝒆𝒎𝒃𝒆𝒓 𝒀𝒐𝒖
(It’s my first story, new btw)
I used advanced directing and I really hope you enjoy the plot if you do decide to read it!
Description: After her sister’s disappearance, Adriana starts an adventure with her sister’s ex. His shady past and choices, put her life in danger. Will she hate or forgive him in the end?
Four chapters so far
Link here: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5959614017765376
Description: Ally never had a normal life because of her trauma, her life takes an unexpected turn when her past finally catches up to her and it turns out that the life she knew was a lie.
My Instagram: @Alibest_episode