Opening Scene Help

Hey everyone, I’m trouble with the opening scene of my story.
Also, thank you for taking your time to read this!

This is my Story’s Description:
Dared to make the school’s bad boy fall in love with her in no less than 3 weeks, then break it off on the night of prom. The only problem? The possibility of her catching feelings

So my original plan for the opening scene was to show the main characters at prom and the female is crying, chasing after him etc. Because the male (bad boy) had found out about the dare before she could tell him.

Is this giving to much away for story or should I keep it?

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I think it would be a big spoiler. I guess some ‘hints’ or flashbacks are fine but opening the story with a scene like you mentioned would be too much. Idk if I’m clear, sorry for the confusion if I am :grin:

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Maybe if you write a scene where the girl says, maybe, something like: “It’s not what you think” and the cut to the boy angry and running, so you start the story from the beginning.

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Yeah I thought so, thanks.

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Yeah, that sounds good thanks

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