Opinion on My Story?

Hi! Can you give me your honest opinion of my story?
I ask my friends to do it but they end up not reading it and forgetting about it and I don’t wanna ask them again cause I’ll sound needy and desperate.

Step Dowells

Hi! I need the same actually. Would you be interested in kind of a read for read but with honest, not sugar coated opinion?

sure! what’s your story called?

Its called Phantom, here’s the link http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6188434841796608
I will PM you once I read yours

okay thanks