Ugh I’ve already published my story Plan B but I would like to hear some thoughts about my story description. And I have two different descriptions in my mind and I can’t decide witch one is better so please tell me your opinion. I’m lost with this and I really need some help.
You have a past with prison break planning but now you’ve left that life behind. Until you meet a cocky but charming Braiden Duane, who asks your help. Will you be able to say no?
You’re a regular high school girl with not so legal past. You meet a cocky but charming Braiden Duane, and then only thing what you can think is will your past become your future?
so witch one is better? or are those even good?