Opinions for my upcoming story Plot

So I really wanted to take a Cliche Topic and change it up a little bit, even for my first story I tried to keep the Theme was about siblings and a rom/com but I kept the characters and the plot slightly different than expected and readers seemed to like it.

So hear me out before you go running after hearing the word Mafia :rofl: :rofl: .
I want to take the Mafia theme but I want My MC to not be this innocent little flower, I want her to be Badass and Strong on the other hand I don’t want the LL to be like a Play Boy but more respectful of women. And I don’t want them to have a toxic relationship but more of a real story.

This is the Story Description:
She is as Dangerous as him, if not More. He is Calm and Collected,
But knows what he wants and knows how to get it.
What will happen when their Worlds Collide??

So As A Reader Would You Read It??.


I would definitely read it. Sounds really good! :sparkles: :heart:


Thank God :see_no_evil: :see_no_evil: .

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Here is my instagram let me know when it is out I will totally give you reads! :grin:

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I mean a badass mc in a mafia story is pretty cliche… I see it a lot.


That does make sense :thinking: :thinking: , I’ll see how else I can set her Apart then.
Thanks :innocent: :innocent: .

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Your welcome!! :heart:

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I would read it for sure.

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