Opinions needed for my unpublished story! ASAP!


#1



Hi! I just wrote my story a few days ago and I want to see if its okay or not.
Can you guys tell me your opinion about my story? It’s only chapter 1 and 2
I’ll really appreciate it if someone does!
(BTW PLS TURN ON THE SOUND AT THE INTRO)


#2

Love it* also said in the fanmail!