I’m currently working on a vampire story, it will be my first story and I’m wondering how people feel about certain things and if they will stop reading because of them.
-Your character’s sister is a mean popular girl, yes it’s very cliche, but the twist is that she only behaves that way at school or in front of friends so she can fit in and is actually not so bad at home, she will also change quite a bit later on. Would it bother anyone that I’m using this trope if it’s not what it appears?
-You have a boyfriend automatically at the start (though not permanently) and you kiss with no option not to, Would that bother anyone that A. You start with a boyfriend and B. You have to let him kiss you?
-When you go to school, I skip making a scene in the classroom and have a short narration instead because nothing important happens, is that okay? I know there’s show and not tell, but there really was nothing to show.
-A certain character with CC options can only have pale skin.
-Your character’s eye color will change to a different color.
-Your character will turn into a vampire and become pale and people will mention it, but I will have a short explanation and leave it up to the player to decide in a second CC scene what constitutes as pale in comparison to whatever their skin tone originally was. (Example: They had darker skin, so pale for them might be more of a tan color, or they might feel like going full white, or possible one shade lighter than before.) Is that too much to have some one do themselves?
-Is there anything anyone is sick of seeing in vampire stories that I should avoid?
-Is there anything you would like to see in a vampire story that I should consider adding?
-Tips and suggestions for any and all are appreciated.