I think it really has lots of potential and already looks really good! Wow!
Here are my suggestions on how you can improve the cover - but that’s just my personal preference!:
- I would move the title slightly down cause I find it a bit to far up
- For more realistic hair try using a finer brush and different shades of the same color
- As far as the shading of the skin is concerned I’d also use a slightly finer brush as this comes as a bit to much for me
Other than that I think it’s really good!! I especially love the blurry background!
Yes, @Fiffy already said it. Maybe try to shade a bit more?
But yes it looks really good
I would put ‘light my’ on top of the guy’s head (not touching it but closer) and ‘way’ on top of the girl’s head. And I would make the L in light upper case but it looks amazing this way too. The drawing looks so cool.