Opinions On My Description!

Okay so, I’m writing a story about the outbreak of a zombie apocalypse, and I’m just wondering if this description sounds good enough.

Description:
When a sudden outbreak of zombies sweeps across the nation, you are forced to survive with your best friend, your crush, a mean girl, and a nerd. It’s up to you to lead the group, fight villains, and form a new community in “The Apocalypse”.

Tell me if this sounds good enough, or if I should change anything, please. :wink:

THANK YOU!

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I think it sounds fine :slight_smile: its a really good description the readers will know what they are going to read about and that you will have 3 mean characters and the MC, it always lets them know there will be drama action and romance all balled in one.

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Thank you! :grin:

You’re welcome hun. :slight_smile:

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I like it. Only thing, I don’t get why “The Apocalypse” in the end is put in quotes

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Oh, because that’s the name of the story. :blush: Should I not add the quotation marks?

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I think you shouldn’t. It’s just grammatically puzzling :smiley:

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Okay, thanks for the feedback! :grin:

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@Sydney_H or @Jeremy can you please close this. :slightly_smiling_face:

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