Opinions on my first Story?

Hi everyone! :wave:
I am new here and I finally figured out how to write a story on Episode! I just published the first 3 chapters of my first story and I’d love to have your opinion on it. How can I improve? Your opinion means a lot to me! Also, do you have suggestions on how to promote your story?
Thank you so much and have a lovely day! :kissing_heart:

STORY : My (Royal) Host Family
AUTHOR : Sara Episode
GENRE : Drama
STYLE : Ink
STORY DESCRIPTION : They say that an exchange year abroad can be life-changing. And if you are hosted in a family that is a little out of the ordinary, well… your life will surely never be the same

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hello, would you be up to do a r4r?

ill send proof that I read it! :slight_smile:

Story title: Fighting Over Him

Story Author: Silent Platinum

Genre: Fantasy/ romance

Story Description: You’re living in a world of fantasy as a demon, ​but will everything change when you find you’re self and you’re twin sister fighting over him?

Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4837463517167616

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Hope you enjoy <3

Name: The Ember Moon Pack

Description:

Being the Hybrid Queen is not easy. War, love, lust, and betrayal awaits.

New episodes every week!

Customizable Characters, LGBTQ+, 5 Endings, Choices Matter, Music!

Chapters: technically 9 bc ch 1 is customization

Genre: Fantasy/romance/horror

Style: Limelight

Link:

Instagram: gisellepisode :smile:

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