Opinions on my LL action story >The Menace<

Hey all!

I just published my Action story with two episodes so far and I wanted some opinions on it.

Story: The Menace
Author: @Kia.ep
Style: LL
Episodes: 2 so far
Description: After a unsolved plane crash case, she is now 20 again, has a sixth sense, memory loss and has no idea who she truly is. What will happen when one menace causes a domino effect?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/4614313682862080


Cover made by @erika_dzul_art on instagram

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just have to say love the idea and the cover!

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Thank you! :blush:

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np

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kayn can hit it from da back js :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:

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purrd as u should <3

GO READ! contains full body LL ols and advanced zooms and directing :smirk:

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This looks cool I’ll def check it out

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Thank you!

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Omg yas-

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This story is directed very well.
The overlays are used extremely well.
It has an intriguing story…
It’s totally worth your time…
Loved it by the way… :kissing_heart::kissing_heart::kissing_heart::kissing_heart::kissing_heart::smiling_face_with_three_hearts::smiling_face_with_three_hearts::smiling_face_with_three_hearts::smiling_face_with_three_hearts::smiling_face_with_three_hearts::smiling_face_with_three_hearts::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::heart_eyes::kissing::kissing::kissing::kissing::kissing::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes::kissing_closed_eyes:

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just have to say this is an amazing story :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:love it

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The art is SERVINGGG :crazy_face: :heart_eyes:

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