I recently started writing a new story called “Hidden Powers.” This is my story description. Does it make sense? Please be honest!! And help me change it if it doesn’t sound right. Thanks.
Story Description: What happens when you and your twin brother discover you have magic powers that were passed down from your mother who died from an unknown death?
P.S: I want my characters to try and discover why their mother died, but I dont know how I should add that into my description. And it has to be 180 characters or less.