Opinions on my upcoming first story?

Hi there!
My name is Mira and I’m currently working on my first story.
I’ve always wanted to write one, but I’ve only gotten around to it now.
I was just wondering if anyone could provide me their opinion on it :slight_smile:
It is not out yet, but it should be soon.
Here’s the description:

Title: I’m a Government Experiment

“After being raised in a lab for almost 10 years, Nueve finally escapes. Now hiding from the Government, her life is rudely interrupted by Bellamy. Coincidence? I think not.”

Genre: Sci-fi/ Fantasy/ Romance/ Comedy/ I don’t know, I’m just having fun

Number of LI’s: 1

Limited customization for LI and MC for story purposes <3

But yeah, first three episodes are almost finished and should be out by the end of the month <3


It sounds great I can’t wait to read it! Let me know when it comes out :slight_smile:

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I will! Thank you so much xx


Some sneak peaks of all three chapters xxx

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It looks good I want to read as well

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Thank you! xx

Please don’t have the chancla :joy::joy:

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omg I’d love to read this

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Thank you! I’m glad you think it 's funny! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: :sweat_smile:

Oh! I forgot to say- the third to last screenshot has a background character with the wrong hairstyle. All the background characters are randomly generated so I fixed it after I took the screenshot xx <3