Hi there! I’m working on my first ever episode story and wanted some feedback. The story is about seven teens (including reader) who are seniors in high school. They go on a school trip and talk about their fears . After an intense meteor shower, they wake up the next day to discover that the things they said they feared most, are now their superpowers!
Story summary: Being a high school senior is hard, but being a superhero is considered even harder. When you and a group of classmates discover your ironic superpowers, how will you balance getting your diploma and saving the world?
Fear of Drowning = able to manipulate water
Fear of Heights = Ability to fly
Also, how would you rate this cover? What can I change? I thought about adding in the superpowers but idk…
I like the simple yet busy look of it.
maybe you should make the characters bigger though I think that they will be harder to see when you see it on episode.
It think it looks amazing!!
Hi there! I think your story idea is amazing! Is it published or do you still work on it. Either way, you will already have a reader for it!
I love this! Is it published? I would love to read it
Unfortunately no, not yet. I still have a lot of work to do and haven’t even gotten pass the first episode .
Hey don’t worry about it, I know that it takes time! So no worries, I will wait for it!
I love the minimalist art! I agree that the characters might be too small to see on a phone screen though…maybe make the small cover them as superheroes, and the large cover them as normal teens, so you can zoom in on them a bit more? It looks good as it is too!
Also, I love the concept for the story, so lmk when its published! I’d be excited to read it!
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