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ELI runs into Anna’s room and Upon arrival she sees Anna crying on the bed

Eli would be so much better off… without me.

I bet she wouldn’t even care if I was suddenly gone forever…

(Would she even… miss me?)

ELI tears up


(Eli is Anna’s girlfriend, but they’re on a break, because Eli saw an old friend of Anna’s kiss her, but didn’t know Anna didn’t give consent and was too upset to let Anna explain. And now Anna’s been even more depressed than she ever was and she has a history of being suicidal)

that’s an amazing scene! Even with the small amount of text you got me invested.

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Maybe remove this? It contradicts the dialouge before this.

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