Origin - Script look over

I finished up writing the dialogue script for the first episode of Origin. I would like some feedback on it. If you’d like to read it over and tell me if I should add more or if something’s wrong feel free to let me know and I’ll pm you what I have. I think I’m ready to start coding I’d just like a second opinion. Thanks in advance.

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