Percy's Story Reviews!


#1

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I will be giving feedback on stories ( I will be only reading the first chapter)

CLICK THIS

All I need to review your story is
Story Name:
Author Name:
Link to your story:
Art Work:
Small summary of your story

How I will be reviewing your stories

Appeal:
Plot
Is it a Pop or a Flop?
and more.

Thank you :).


#2

Story name: Choose?!!!
Author: @ya
Link:


Art: (hope you mean cover :sweat_smile:)

Description:
You aren’t a superhero, nor have magical powers! Just a wrong wish of your’s , causes Fate of whole human race to be in your’s hands!!! Will you Succeed or face defeat?? (2 ends)
Hope you enjoy :wink:


#3

Thanks for creating this thread!
Here’s my first story:
Name: Girl of Deception
Description: Aria Lamar has is all. She’s rich, beautiful and smart. But she’s a selfish arrogant jerk. Little does she know that’s all about to change.
Genre: Adventure
Btw the small cover below is still being reviewed


#4

HEY!!

I’ve JUST published a new story about Greek Gods and Goddesses!

HERE’S THE INFO!!

Story Name: DEMIGODDESS

Author Name: Giselle Crescent

Genre: Fantasy

Description: Being the daughter of Zeus isn’t easy. Add responsibilities and your mother having cancer topped on with a forbidden temptation to a boy who can rock your world , literally. CC

Small Cover:
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Large Cover:
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LINK:


#5

When I clicked the link it did not work :(.


#6

Hello, I read the first chapter of your story and here is what I think about it.

Plot: This plot is similar to the CURSE OF CHARLIE, which I don’t mind. I think everything moves too quickly and some obstacles can help :smiley: .
Coding: There were some glitches and coding mistakes throughout the story like overlay mistakes, walk to spot mistakes. (I am bad at coding too lol.)
Appeal: The artwork is nice. ;D

Overall a ok story has room for improvement, make spot positions better.
Is it a POP or a FLOP : For this story, I would say a POP, though close to a FLOP.

Keep coding~


#7

:sweat: sorry , here is the link again , hope it works :sweat_smile:


#8

Thanks for the feedback!


#9

Hello @Hi1!

Thank you for creating this thread, this is really nice of you.

If you’re interested in stories where you’re thrown right into the action- this may be the one for you!

Title: Kaleidoscopic
Author: The Turtle Trainer
Description: There are two sides to every story. Heroes and Villains, but what happens when you try to switch sides in the middle of the war?
Cover:
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Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5318703894102016

Thank you in advance and have a good day :wink: