Percy's Story Reviews!



I will be giving feedback on stories ( I will be only reading the first chapter)


All I need to review your story is
Story Name:
Author Name:
Link to your story:
Art Work:
Small summary of your story

How I will be reviewing your stories

Is it a Pop or a Flop?
and more.

Thank you :).


Story name: Choose?!!!
Author: @ya

Art: (hope you mean cover :sweat_smile:)

You aren’t a superhero, nor have magical powers! Just a wrong wish of your’s , causes Fate of whole human race to be in your’s hands!!! Will you Succeed or face defeat?? (2 ends)
Hope you enjoy :wink:


Thanks for creating this thread!
Here’s my first story:
Name: Girl of Deception
Description: Aria Lamar has is all. She’s rich, beautiful and smart. But she’s a selfish arrogant jerk. Little does she know that’s all about to change.
Genre: Adventure
Btw the small cover below is still being reviewed



I’ve JUST published a new story about Greek Gods and Goddesses!



Author Name: Giselle Crescent

Genre: Fantasy

Description: Being the daughter of Zeus isn’t easy. Add responsibilities and your mother having cancer topped on with a forbidden temptation to a boy who can rock your world , literally. CC

Small Cover:

Large Cover:



When I clicked the link it did not work :(.


Hello, I read the first chapter of your story and here is what I think about it.

Plot: This plot is similar to the CURSE OF CHARLIE, which I don’t mind. I think everything moves too quickly and some obstacles can help :smiley: .
Coding: There were some glitches and coding mistakes throughout the story like overlay mistakes, walk to spot mistakes. (I am bad at coding too lol.)
Appeal: The artwork is nice. ;D

Overall a ok story has room for improvement, make spot positions better.
Is it a POP or a FLOP : For this story, I would say a POP, though close to a FLOP.

Keep coding~


:sweat: sorry , here is the link again , hope it works :sweat_smile:


Thanks for the feedback!


Hello @Hi1!

Thank you for creating this thread, this is really nice of you.

If you’re interested in stories where you’re thrown right into the action- this may be the one for you!

Title: Kaleidoscopic
Author: The Turtle Trainer
Description: There are two sides to every story. Heroes and Villains, but what happens when you try to switch sides in the middle of the war?

Thank you in advance and have a good day :wink: