Phone call between characters

So my first scene is a phone call between characters but it’s not a smooth as I’d like it could anyone give me some tips please :slight_smile:

https://youtu.be/YotRY-TZcXo

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Hm, I dont see anything wrong it with, it looks fine to me since it’s your first phone call.

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If you’re talking about the pause in between each one, I see the character talking does an animation before the other character responds… If that’s correct, try this…

&BOY is action
GIRL (talk_phone…)
What she says…

That’ll make the script go a bit more flowy!

Also, instead of having him flash in, maybe make a background that is half and half? That way instead of the big flash and then him entering (unless that was intentional), it’ll just change backgrounds super quick and he’ll appear that way?! :slight_smile:
Hope this helps!

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I’ll give it a go so do you mean like this

&boy is phone-listen
Girl (talk_phone)
Insert speech

Yes maam!!

it worked Thank you soooo much :slight_smile:

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@Sydney_H I have a solution can you please close this thread

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Watch some Joseph Evan tutorials on YouTube! He honestly made my story amazing and it’s so easy to do because he’s very good at explaining

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Closed by OP request. :smiley: