Please! Give me a feedback on my story

opinion

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Hey guys!
I wrote my first episode and I want to know what your thoughts are before I publish it .
After reading my first episode, would you continue reading it?
What would you change?
Is it thrilling?

Title - No changes after a year
Author - Teddy’s Dollhouse
Genre - Drama, Love, Comedy
Description - Zen had a beautiful childhood until he was 10 years old with his father but after meeting a beautiful women who claims to be his true mother everything changes.


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