Please give me feedback on my story

Here is the link to my story. It’s my first one and my first time writing code like this so I would appreciate knowing if you enjoy the story so far and if there’s anything you’d improve or change. Honest feedback welcome :slightly_smiling_face:

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Hey! I’ll give your story a read! Do you want to read my story in the meantime? If you do, I’m putting the link down below, but if you don’t that’s fine, too. :slight_smile:

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Yes please do, I’d love to read yours too! :smile:

Cool! Here’s the link:

Hey! Please read my first story!

I read your story preview, It was good! I appreciate all the customization options for the characters. Do you mind reading my chapter an giving me feedback? There’s also character submission available if you go through my page. Thanks!

Hey! I’d also appreciate some feedback.

Story - Hiding the truth
Author - ab.creates
Chapters out - 7
Description - Scarlett struggles with depression due to her horrendeous childhood, but puts on a brave face. Will her new roommate Bailey & best friend Didi be able to break her walls?

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile: