Please give me feedback on my story


#1

Here is the link to my story. It’s my first one and my first time writing code like this so I would appreciate knowing if you enjoy the story so far and if there’s anything you’d improve or change. Honest feedback welcome :slightly_smiling_face:


#2

Hey! I’ll give your story a read! Do you want to read my story in the meantime? If you do, I’m putting the link down below, but if you don’t that’s fine, too. :slight_smile:


#3

Yes please do, I’d love to read yours too! :smile:


#4

Cool! Here’s the link:


#6

Hey! Please read my first story!


#7

I read your story preview, It was good! I appreciate all the customization options for the characters. Do you mind reading my chapter an giving me feedback? There’s also character submission available if you go through my page. Thanks!


#8

Hey! I’d also appreciate some feedback.

Story - Hiding the truth
Author - ab.creates
Chapters out - 7
Description - Scarlett struggles with depression due to her horrendeous childhood, but puts on a brave face. Will her new roommate Bailey & best friend Didi be able to break her walls?


#9

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile:


#10