Please give your feedback on my story?

Hi! My name is Ray and I am recently working on my first story. I was hoping if anyone would be able to read my first chapter and give me their feedback? I would really appreciate it.
Story Title: The Day I Became a Serial Killer LL
Author: RayRay
Genre: Thriller
Style: LimeLight
Description: Senior in high school has her life planned out until she accidentally kills someone she will do anything to keep her secret even if that means…Killing More.

Hello @Sade, this is Sydney the moderator. Welcome to the forums! :smiley: Moved this to Share Feedback since you’re asking for feedback. Make sure to check out our Forum Tutorial for more info about where to correctly create topics, and feel to PM me if there are any questions. :wink:

thank you so much:grin::grin:

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Hi! I’ll give it a read once I get out of class. Do you want me to post my feedback here or would you like a PM? :grin:

a PM would do thank you!:grin:

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