Please help I got this coding error

I’m new and would really appreciate if you helped me out :revolving_hearts:

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could you show your script from when the choice starts? It will be easier to find the solution.

Sure :sparkling_heart:

Well I doubt this will fix the error but you have all your choices seperated out from each other. I would put goto and labels instead of the way you have set it out it will be much neater. I don’t remember if it is this error but usually in my choices they have choices and that means I sometimes miss a } so try to put one of those after one of them and if it doesn’t work then try to go down them and if none of them work then if you copy an paste it here and I will see if I can find the issue.

One thing that came up when using gem choices for me was that you need to title them next to the choice. At least that’s an issue that came up for me but this is what I had to put. I am not the most experienced with gem choices so if that’s what is affecting it I can’t really help.

choice (support the author)

Tried the goto command didn’t work :sleepy:.
And there weren’t any missing } .

POM POM (talk_awkward_loop)
So would you please support me with donating some gems [READER]? (SPP = Support Pom Pom).
Choosing any Gem choices will support me and is appreciated a lot.

choice (support the author)
GEMS:5"SPP+watch Pom Pom dance in a HOT cat custome."{

    POM POM (talk_exclaim_yes_happy)
THANK YOU SO MUCH.

@remove Microphone Black from POM POM
@zoom reset

    POM POM (sing_dance_shimmy_loop)
[READER] GAVE ME GEMS ,[READER] GAVE ME GEEEEMS.

@DIRECTOR stands screen left in zone 3
DIRECTOR
| bold , animation:shuffle-sideways |UGH STOP FOR GOD’S SAKE THAT’S EMBARRASSING.

@POM POM is react_startled_embarrassed

    DIRECTOR
| bold |JUST SHOW THEM YOUR DANCE MOVES.

@POM POM is sigh_disappointed

    POM POM (talk_neutral_atcamera_loop)
Here's me dancing in a cat costume .

INT. DARK ANGEL CLUB.- NIGHT
@POM POM is idle
@remove Microphone Black from POM POM
music music_club_lp
@cut to zone 2
@POM POM spot 0.533 159 303 in zone 2
@POM POM changes into POMPOM_CAT
@zoom on 484 202 to 251% in 3
@POM POM is dance_grind_neutral_loop THEN POM POM is dance_drop_it THEN POM POM is dance_sway_loop_rear
@zoom on 478 274 to 510% in 2
@POM POM is dance_whip_loop THEN POM POM is dance_club_happy_loop
&zoom on 484 202 to 251% in 1
&POM POM is dance_drop_it
@POM POM is dance_armsup_bounce_loop THEN POM POM is dance_sway_loop_rear
@POM POM is faint
@pause for a beat
@speechbubble is 135 222 to 100% with tail_bottom_left

    POM POM
| animation:shuffle-sideways , bold |OUCH.

@transition fade out black 3

}GEMS:8 “SPP+See a small bonus scene of Regina And Savanah”{

@zoom reset
@DIRECTOR stands screen center in zone 3
POM POM (talk_exclaim_yes_happy)
THANK YOU SO MUCH.

@remove Microphone Black from POM POM
@zoom reset

    POM POM (sing_dance_shimmy_loop)
[READER] GAVE ME GEMS ,[READER] GAVE ME GEEEEMS.

    DIRECTOR
| bold , animation:shuffle-sideways , color:olive |UGH STOP FOR GOD'S SAKE THAT'S EMBARRASSING.

@POM POM is react_startled_embarrassed

    DIRECTOR
| color:olive |JUST SHOW THEM THE BONUS SCENE.

@POM POM is sigh_disappointed

    POM POM (talk_neutral_atcamera_loop)
Here's the bonus scene.

@POM POM is bow_happy
@transition fade out black 3

INT. CUTE BEDROOM GIRL - DAY
@SAVANAH changes into SAVANAH_OUIFIT2
@BRUNETTE REGINA changes into REGINA_OUIFIT4
@SAVANAH spot 1.280 95 2 in zone 1 AND SAVANAH faces right
@BRUNETTE REGINA spot 1.280 241 7 in zone 1

    BRUNETTE REGINA (talk_afraid)
Sav are you sure you can do this?

@SAVANAH is yawn_bored
SAVANAH (talk_apathetic)
Yes ,I’ve done it before.

    BRUNETTE REGINA (talk_pointup_pretentious)
So you're 101% sure that my hairs will stay gorgeous?

    SAVANAH (talk_exhausted)
Yes Regina , YEEEES.

@BRUNETTE REGINA is deepbreath
BRUNETTE REGINA (talk_neutral)
Ok then ,let’s get twins.

@transition iris out in 3
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
NARRATOR
One failure later.
@pause for a beat
INT. CUTE BEDROOM GIRL - DAY
@transition iris in 2
@cut to zone 3
@SAVANAH changes into SAVANAH_OUIFIT2
@BRUNETTE REGINA changes into REGINA_OUIFIT4
@SAVANAH spot 1.064 252 129 in zone 3 AND REGINA spot 1.127 49 65 in zone 3
@REGINA is scream_angry AND SAVANAH is idle_flashlight_scared_loop

    REGINA (scream_angry)
I WANT MY ALMOND HAIRS BACK.

@REGINA faces right
music music_edgyrock
REGINA (talk_accuse_angry)
GIVE ME MY HAIRS BACK.
@zoom on SAVANAH to 250% in 0.5
SAVANAH (talk_awkward_loop)
Maybe we can go to a hair sal-

@zoom on REGINA to 400% in 0.1
REGINA (talk_argue_angry)
SHUT THE FCK UP YOU LITTLE BTCH.
@zoom on SAVANAH to 400% in 0.2
@SAVANAH is react_gasp_dismayed

@zoom on REGINA to 400% in 0.1
REGINA (talk_argument_angry)
I WILL F*CKING KILL YOU.

@zoom on SAVANAH to 300% in 0
@SAVANAH is idle_flashlight_scared_loop

@zoom on REGINA to 300% in 0.1
REGINA (talk_accuse_angry)
YOU ARE SO DEAD SAVANAH.

@zoom on REGINA to 350% in 0
REGINA (talk_disgusted_atcamera_loop)
D.
@zoom on REGINA to 400% in 0
REGINA (talk_disgusted_atcamera_loop)
E.
@zoom on REGINA to 450% in 0.1
REGINA (talk_disgusted_atcamera_loop)
A.

@zoom on REGINA to 500% in 0.1
REGINA (talk_disgusted_atcamera_loop)
D.

@SAVANAH is idle_baby_rock_worried_loop
@zoom reset

@REGINA walks to spot 1.127 202 95 in zone 3 AND REGINA does it while run_athletic_sword_angry_loop THEN SAVANAH is fall

@transition fade out black 0.5

}GEMS:12"SPP + option 1 + option 2"{

    POM POM (talk_exclaim_yes_happy)
THANK YOU SO MUCH.

@remove Microphone Black from POM POM
@zoom reset

    POM POM (sing_dance_shimmy_loop)
[READER] GAVE ME GEMS ,[READER] GAVE ME GEEEEMS.

@DIRECTOR stands screen left in zone 3
DIRECTOR
| bold , animation:shuffle-sideways |UGH STOP FOR GOD’S SAKE THAT’S EMBARRASSING.

@POM POM is react_startled_embarrassed

    DIRECTOR
| bold |JUST SHOW THEM YOUR DANCE MOVES AND THAT BONUS SCENE.

@POM POM is sigh_disappointed

    POM POM (talk_neutral_atcamera_loop)
Here's me dancing in a cat costume .

INT. DARK ANGEL CLUB.- NIGHT
@POM POM is idle
@remove Microphone Black from POM POM
music music_club_lp
@cut to zone 2
@POM POM spot 0.533 159 303 in zone 2
@POM POM changes into POMPOM_CAT
@zoom on 484 202 to 251% in 3
@POM POM is dance_grind_neutral_loop THEN POM POM is dance_drop_it THEN POM POM is dance_sway_loop_rear
@zoom on 478 274 to 510% in 2
@POM POM is dance_whip_loop THEN POM POM is dance_club_happy_loop
&zoom on 484 202 to 251% in 1
&POM POM is dance_drop_it
@POM POM is dance_armsup_bounce_loop THEN POM POM is dance_sway_loop_rear
@POM POM is faint
@pause for a beat
@speechbubble is 135 222 to 100% with tail_bottom_left

    POM POM
| animation:shuffle-sideways , bold |OUCH.

@transition fade out black 3
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
music music_edgyrock
NARRATOR
Savanah and Regina bonus scene.

}INT. CUTE BEDROOM GIRL - DAY
@SAVANAH changes into SAVANAH_OUIFIT2
@BRUNETTE REGINA changes into REGINA_OUIFIT4
@SAVANAH spot 1.280 95 2 in zone 1 AND SAVANAH faces right
@BRUNETTE REGINA spot 1.280 241 7 in zone 1

    BRUNETTE REGINA (talk_afraid)
Sav are you sure you can do this?

@SAVANAH is yawn_bored
SAVANAH (talk_apathetic)
Yes ,I’ve done it before.

    BRUNETTE REGINA (talk_pointup_pretentious)
So you're 101% sure that my hairs will stay gorgeous?

    SAVANAH (talk_exhausted)
Yes Regina , YEEEES.

@BRUNETTE REGINA is deepbreath
BRUNETTE REGINA (talk_neutral)
Ok then ,let’s get twins.

@transition iris out in 3
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
NARRATOR
One failure later.
@pause for a beat
INT. CUTE BEDROOM GIRL - DAY
@transition iris in 2
@cut to zone 3
@SAVANAH changes into SAVANAH_OUIFIT2
@BRUNETTE REGINA changes into REGINA_OUIFIT4
@SAVANAH spot 1.064 252 129 in zone 3 AND REGINA spot 1.127 49 65 in zone 3
music sadtrombone
@REGINA is scream_angry AND SAVANAH is idle_baby_rock_worried_loop

    REGINA (scream_angry)
I WANT MY ALMOND HAIRS BACK.

@REGINA faces right
music music_edgyrock
REGINA (talk_accuse_angry)
GIVE ME MY HAIRS BACK.
@zoom on SAVANAH to 250% in 0.5
SAVANAH (talk_awkward_loop)
Maybe we can go to a hair sal-

@zoom on REGINA to 400% in 0.1
REGINA (talk_argue_angry)
SHUT THE FCK UP YOU LITTLE BTCH.
@zoom on SAVANAH to 400% in 0.2
@SAVANAH is react_gasp_dismayed

@zoom on REGINA to 400% in 0.1
REGINA (talk_argument_angry)
I WILL F*CKING KILL YOU.

@zoom on SAVANAH to 300% in 0
@SAVANAH is idle_flashlight_scared_loop

@zoom on REGINA to 300% in 0.1
REGINA (talk_accuse_angry)
YOU ARE SO DEAD SAVANAH.

@zoom on REGINA to 350% in 0
REGINA (talk_disgusted_atcamera_loop)
D.
@zoom on REGINA to 400% in 0
REGINA (talk_disgusted_atcamera_loop)
E.
@zoom on REGINA to 450% in 0.1
REGINA (talk_disgusted_atcamera_loop)
A.

@zoom on REGINA to 500% in 0.1
REGINA (talk_disgusted_atcamera_loop)
D.

@SAVANAH is idle_baby_rock_worried_loop
@zoom reset

@REGINA walks to spot 1.127 202 95 in zone 3 AND REGINA does it while run_athletic_sword_angry_loop THEN SAVANAH is fall

@transition fade out black 0.5

}“I’m broke Pom Pom”{
@pause for 0
POM POM (talk_neutral_atcamera_loop)
That’s fine ,please recommend my story to others [READER].

@zoom reset

@DIRECTOR stands screen left in zone 3
DIRECTOR
| bold , animation:shuffle-sideways |BUT WE NEED GEMS.

@POM POM is sigh_disappointed

    POM POM (talk_exhausted)
Just ignore her.

    POM POM (talk_gossip_atcamera)
Until next time [READER].

}
@pause for 0
@speechbubble reset
INT. BLACK - NIGHT
NARRATOR
To be continued…

Did you managed to make it work or you still have the error?

No ,still getting errors :slightly_frowning_face: .

(this will be your question)
choice “choice1” {
NARR
(this will be your script if they choose choice1)
} “choice2” {
NARR
(this will be your script if they choose choice2)
}

(make sure you have all that in your script)

Thank you so much ,it seems that it does not have problem with my first and second choice ,but it gives me errors for the forth and third choice idk why :sob: .

“I’m broke Pom Pom”
{
@pause for 0
POM POM (talk_neutral_atcamera_loop)
That’s fine ,please recommend my story to others [READER].

@zoom reset

@DIRECTOR stands screen left in zone 3
DIRECTOR
| bold , animation:shuffle-sideways |BUT WE NEED GEMS.

@POM POM is sigh_disappointed

    POM POM (talk_exhausted)
Just ignore her.

    POM POM (talk_gossip_atcamera)
Until next time [READER].

}

(maybe try this for the 4th)

Why do you have a } on line 9662?

Thank you so much :purple_heart:
I still get errors ,I’m just gonna give up :slight_smile:

Removed it ,and still having problems :slightly_frowning_face: .

Is it the same error or a new one?

The same

You have a bracket that doesn’t belong?
You see these grey arrows? Click on them and you should see your 4 choices.

Sorry, before you do that, make sure your end bracket is on its own line.
}
New line

Post that.

Also, show what it says above the word “choice”

Are there 5 choices?
Try deleting the lines between the narration and choice. Sometimes it’s as simple as that.
I like to put the
} on it’s own line by itself because then, when you click those arrows, you will only see the choices.

4 choices.
Deleted the lines and it worked :flushed: ,tysmm