Please help I'm Look for feedback on my story

Hi everyone,

I’m trying to decide if I should discount my story and start fresh.
Please let me know if you are interested in provided feedback of episode 1 and 2 of my story.

Info below:
12 episode Season 1 complete
Description: When a young powerful couple steals the Kings most prized possession, it starts a chain reaction that will bring their world to its knees.

Thank you and I appreciate any feedback or suggestions.
Or if it’s so terrible that I need to discount it.
Please help!!

Tldax :slight_smile:

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