Hi everyone,
I’m trying to decide if I should discount my story and start fresh.
Please let me know if you are interested in provided feedback of episode 1 and 2 of my story.
Info below:
Essentia
fantasy
12 episode Season 1 complete
Description: When a young powerful couple steals the Kings most prized possession, it starts a chain reaction that will bring their world to its knees.
Link:
Thank you and I appreciate any feedback or suggestions.
Or if it’s so terrible that I need to discount it.
Please help!!
Tldax 