Please help! I'm looking for constructive criticism/feedback on my story


#1

Hi everyone,

I published my first story back in March. The story has been read a fair amount of time but I’m losing hope that it will truly take off or if anyone has read it past the first chapter! I would like to know why!

So, I’m looking for someone to tell me in a constructive way, what is lacking in my story and why I can’t seem to get others to read it! I’ve put my heart and soul into writing this story, it means more to me than you can imagine!
If you would like to read and review my story please DM!
Here is the link to my story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6652498123816960

Title: The Essentia Chronicles

Thank you in advance for your help! :blush:
TD


#2

I will help!


#3

Thank you!!! :slight_smile:

Please PM me with your feedback. I really appreciate this!

Thank you

Have a great Day!

-T


#4

I’d be happy to do it. Want to do mine as well?
Name: The Ember Moon Pack
Description: You’re the Queen of the Supernaturals. What’ll happen when you find out that your mate is your pack’s enemy, and your kidnapper? CC ChoicesMatter
Chapters: technically 3 bc ch 2 is customization
Genre: Fantasy
Style: Limelight
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5387476824358912
Instagram: emberpackepisode
NOTE: Please send review through PM.
Cover:


#5

Sure, I will read your story too! I will PM you with feedback once I’m finished! :blush:

Thank you!!


#6

I can do a review for you (the first three episodes) :slight_smile:

And if you want, you can read my story but I don’t force you lol


#7

Thank you!
I’ll read your story. I’m intrigued by the description. :slight_smile:


#8

Alright! I don’t mind reviewing it. Will you review mines also!! And send a screenshot!! I’ll send you one!
I love HIM and I (LIMELIGHT)! Check it out! http://bit.ly/EpisodeHere #episode


#9

Thank you! I look forward to your review of my story!
I will add you story to my favorites now and message you back once I’m finished! :slight_smile:


#10

#11

Topic closed due to one month of inactivity.