I published my first story back in March. The story has been read a fair amount of time but I’m losing hope that it will truly take off or if anyone has read it past the first chapter! I would like to know why!
So, I’m looking for someone to tell me in a constructive way, what is lacking in my story and why I can’t seem to get others to read it! I’ve put my heart and soul into writing this story, it means more to me than you can imagine!
If you would like to read and review my story please DM!
Here is the link to my story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6652498123816960
Title: The Essentia Chronicles
Thank you in advance for your help!