Please help me make my story interesting!


I have a new story, 3 reads and 4 chapters.
I think my story is kinda messy and confusing at some points. But because it’s my story I’m too biased to think there’s something wrong with it lol. I need some opinions and constructive criticism.
My story is called “Killer Party.”

I greatly appreciate if you take your time to help :heart_eyes: :kissing_heart: