Please help me with my story description?

Nelles · December 29, 2018, 10:18pm

I have written about a hundred different ones and ended with this:

What if your life depended on you not being with the man you fell in love with? A beautiful action-packed romance in Limelight. CC, special scenes and a modest amount of choices.

Would you read this? Any suggestions for improvement? Thank you in advance

Hannahnevin · December 29, 2018, 10:21pm

If you need any help just pm me or send me a dm on IG it’s hannahc.epiwrites

Keeko · December 30, 2018, 12:27am

Yes, this has been really well written! I wouldn’t change anything.

Lawmaker · December 30, 2018, 12:29am

I would DEFINITELY read this

system · January 29, 2019, 10:38am

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Sydney_H · February 15, 2019, 8:22pm