Please read and give advice!

I have a story that I have recently written. It is called The S.U.I. The story hasn’t been coded and isn’t on episode yet but I would love for you to read it and give me any advice on the first chapter.
You can find it here


ill saved it. ill give it a look another day.

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Interesting story
I read it on the wattspad thing and I’m very intruiged.

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