Please Read My New Story : Seeing Double

Hi everyone!
I created my first story, “Seeing Double”, about a girl who finds a book that leads her to believe that her life may have been a lie. She also moves to a new town with new friends, a new school, and new guys.
I would love to get constructive feedback on this story so I can improve it. So far I have four episodes, and am working on more. Please read it!

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would you like to do read for read?

here is mine xx

Story Title : The Art of The Deal
Author : GraceX
Episodes :
18 ongoing
Action/Comedy/Slight Romance
Romance, betrayal and secrets. What will happen when Isobel gets involved in the black market of the art world and a sexy gang leader?
Insta: epy.gracex

Sure! Please give me constructive feedback on my story. Would you like feedback on yours?

Currently improving my story thus I would greatly appreciate a review. Of course in return I’ll do the same, thanks :blush:
Name: Art of Desire
Author: Joqueena
Genre: comedy
Summary: A love for art but a stronger desire for each other. Will they be able to quench their thirst or will mishaps break them
Style: ink
Instagram: Joqueena_stories (feel free to follow me)
Questions: Is the plot interesting?
Are the directives good?
Are the characters explained properly
Is the genre more comical or romance?
Is the story understandable? Is it okay that the MC is a male rather than a female?

Art of Desire

Closing due to one month of inactivity :slight_smile: