Will read it when I get home and if you ever need advertisements I’m your girl
I’d love to R4R!
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5040097505705984
Story: BLACK BETTY
Genre: Comedy/Drama
Plot: Betty is a small town girl with big dreams of becoming a rock star. Navigating stardom, relationships, fans, and parties…Will she make it or break it? CC
Hi! Let me know if you have some time to do a red4read or a review4review, these are my story details:
Author: Bonnie Dundee
Author Insta: @bonniedundee.epi
Title: Game Of Disguises
Style: Ink
Chapters: 6
Genre: Drama/Action
Brief Description: Two best friends have fun by disguising themselves as other people and attend luxurious and fancy events, but what happens when they find themselves in the wrong place and at the wrong time?
LGBT inclusive + Advanced Directing
Link:
Great, Thank you! And what kind of advertisements do you do?
Will read when I have a chance, please read mine and give a review
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Hi, I’d love to do a read for read with you!
My story details:
Title: My Favorite Mistake
Author: Em
Chapters: 10 (more to come)
Genre: Drama
Style: Ink
Plot: Life seems to be going fine and in its exact order. But what happens when something stops it?
Link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/6210534360088576
Instagram: emdellarosa
P.S.: I didn’t know how to let you name the characters and customize them, but as such not being available, it adds to the depth of the story. But I am working on another story and you will be able to do it there.
Share my story and recommend it if you like… If you don’t… Well, still keep reading, lol.
I do things from flyers to poster currently working on video ads but that’s tough
My review of My Favorite Mistake I judge on 6 categories. Spoting, writing, plotlines, charters developments, clothing, and last but not least directing.
1 to 100
Spoting: Horrible I suggest working on zones because that was my biggest problem with your story. Score 75/100
Writing; Your use of the English language was not bad at all score 75/100
Plotlines: Weak to say the least the story wasn’t engaging at all you couldn’t grab my attention at all score 50/100
Clothing: Was the best thing about this story great choice but in some scenes, it took forever to change clothes score 60/100
Directing: Did your characters do the actions and emotions on cue? Most of the time but I see the did a lot of thing on a loop it was annoying score 45/100
Character Development: I wish I could have liked these characters but I can’t they all felt like one-dimensional character please bring life to the characters real soon score 35/100
Overall score 35 This story needs a makeover quick but its lackluster of style
Hey forgot to mention love the cover of the book it’s awesome.
[https://youtu.be/xm8kR_Q0FkY](https://youtu.be/xm8kR_Q0FkY)