Please Review My Story (Feedback Requested)

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#1

Please review my story, Episode 2&3 are currently in the works. PLEASE DO NOT READ them

Title: Fresh as a Daisy
Synopsis: Ditzy cheerleader, Daisy Linwood, starts junior year and quickly descends into a rebellious lifestyle. Will she find love? MC Customization

Here is my story link: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5945577869541376


#2

I just read episode 1 and I enjoyed your story! It had a good story length and the directing was on point!


#3

Thanks!


#4

Closing due to inactivity :slight_smile:


#5