Please review my story

I’m a new episode writer and I would appreciate your review on my story!


would you like to do a review for review? :grin:

Title: Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane
Author: Marshmallow O.
Genre: Mystery, Romance, Comedy
Style: Limelight
Summary: It’s a race against time as you and your friends try to escape the mysterious sleepover that you were invited to… Read to uncover the Mystery on Hanging Hill Lane.



Chapters: 5 (More to come)

Create your own characters and Choices Matter!:blush:


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I will review your story in next 2 hours.

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i PM’ed you! :grin:

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What are you looking for in your review (grammar/dialogue/plot/choices)?

Also, do you want a review left here or DM?

Let me know and I’ll get to it as soon as I can! :revolving_hearts:

I would like to get review on grammar (because english isn’t my first language) and polt

I would be tankful if you would leave it here)

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