Please review the first chapter of my new story A Queen's Crown

So I was hoping someone would like to review the first episode of my new story called A Queen’s Crown.
I’ll give you a small summary, So the story is about a girl that suddenly becomes queen of the country of Aaros, the story is set in the 17th century or something like that, Aaros is on the brink of war and you as reader will need to form alliances with the neigbouring countries. A forbidden romance and adventure await in A Queen’s crown…

so here is the link if you are interested, I would love to hear your thought on the first chapter, feel free to give me feedback and tips, Thank you xxx

Ink or LL? :kissing_heart:

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It’s a limelight story☺️

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I can’t write a review, but I’ll read it, send screenshots, and maybe give a surprise gift…

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I make edits :blush:

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Omg I would love that!!

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So I read it and I really like it. When r u going to publish it? And PS send a pic of the character so I can edit (try to do it from your phone and not the portal)

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Mi love that tou like it☺️ I’m working on the second chapter I think I’m halfway there so I’ll publish it as soon as possible!

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I’ll send of the character🤗

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