Please rip my story apart

Hello everyone! I have officially finished the first three episodes of my story, and am almost ready to publish. I would just love it if someone could read the first three episodes and, being as harsh as possible, let me know what you think! The fourth episode is still heavily under construction, so don’t read it if you’re not willing to put up with a lot of errors. Thank you so much!

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14 posts were merged into an existing topic: I would love some feedback!