Description: You: A basic bartender. Him: A ruthless Vampire. What happens when you are selected to be his bride for the rest of eternity?
what is happening in the story so far?
Once sec, I’m doing a few edits and then I’ll repost it!
If you wanna send your ideas to me over a PM, I’d be happy to help!
I just put the story back on the thread
BUMP! Pls help
okay, let me get to reading
okay thanks
Okay, so Cassius should direct the MC to the locked room. Then Cassium gives the MC background information about vampires and why he picked the MC to be his bride. Does this make sense?
He didn’t pick the MC to me his bride. They are selected by fate. I was gonna have Jack explain it because Cassius isn’t supposed to like her at first.
I did notice that, the overlay isn’t very good so I’m gonna try to make a new one.
yes. have Jake (or whoever you want) explain it. But make it interactive (less talking, more visuals)
Okay, like what?
what do you mean? Don’t have Jake explain it through complete dialogue (like Jake and the MC is in one place talking throughout.) Shows different kinds of scenes while he’s explaining it.
Oh, okay.
Do you have any other suggestions?
i want to see it when you’re done (if you don’t mind) 
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Maybe the vampires were cursed and that’s why they’re viampires
That would make sense! I’ll let you know when I;m done with the explaining scene
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