Pls give me corrections

Hey I just published my story and I was wondering if you guys can look over my first episode and fix corrections pls and thank you
Link to story:

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I was about to send you to the Bomb Family thread…then I realized you are part of it lol :sweat_smile:

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404 not found


That, when I click the link, it doesn’t found anything.

ok I will resend it k

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