Pls give me corrections


#1

Hey I just published my story and I was wondering if you guys can look over my first episode and fix corrections pls and thank you
Love,
Kamorie
Link to story: http://episodeinteractive.com/s/5919556769284096


#2

I was about to send you to the Bomb Family thread…then I realized you are part of it lol :sweat_smile:


#3

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#4

wdym


#5

That, when I click the link, it doesn’t found anything.


#6

ok I will resend it k


#7

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